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A Lover's Dance

To kiss a burning mouth where hunger yearns And free earthly bonds lovers conceal To fall into love's arms without concerns Where touches are tender and senses feel The needs of time disappear from desires As the tongues of passion burn and implore To stoke consuming flames so flesh perspires In a fiery realm, they both adore Where tremors linger and sighs never end When warm lips merge in a passionate kiss To cross boundaries that love will suspend And dance as lovers in unyielding bliss To dwell far beyond in a world unseen And find a sacred dream where souls convene 9/20/17 contest The Poet's Fire sponsor Gregory Barden

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Date: 12/9/2017 4:05:00 PM
A very sensuous and passionate Sonnet, Fredric. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Sandra
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Date: 12/9/2017 10:57:00 AM
Congratulations Frederic :)
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Date: 12/8/2017 7:41:00 AM
This is wonderful Frederic! Congratulations on your win :) xomo
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Date: 12/7/2017 11:55:00 PM
This is SUPERB, Frederic, with gorgeous phrasing and imagery, and a sensual undertone that trembles throughout ... just adored it! Congratulations on EIGHTH PLACE, and thank you for your patience! SO many incredible entries in this contest ... some I had to cut that did not deserve to be cut.
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Date: 10/2/2017 4:57:00 PM
This is so beautiful Frederic! I especially love the way you ended this! Congratulations on your first place win!
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Date: 10/2/2017 11:22:00 AM
Wonderful Frederic, congratulations on your win...
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Date: 10/2/2017 10:00:00 AM
Frederic, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this wonderful poem!
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Date: 10/2/2017 1:33:00 AM
Congratulations, Frederic on your great win.
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Date: 10/1/2017 10:02:00 PM
Hi Frederic, congratulations on your top win! A passionate and romantic feast. Enjoyed :)
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Date: 10/1/2017 9:22:00 PM
Aha you remembered how much I liked this one, well congrats on a solo number1 this is spectacular Frederick!
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Date: 9/20/2017 7:32:00 PM
You've outdone yourself Frederick, this one will rank high, it's a winner in my book!
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Date: 9/20/2017 3:03:00 PM
A powerful sensual poem of passion unbound! My compliments, Frederic!
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Date: 9/20/2017 2:25:00 PM
- A tender and romantic poems, Frederic -GL in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/20/2017 1:40:00 PM
Potent passions penned so perfectly Mr Parker :)
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Date: 9/20/2017 1:28:00 PM
I envy your ability to write so well of passion. What it must be like "To fall into love's arms without concerns..." Perhaps a refresher course is needed, but for now, a cold shower might help. I'm sure this will do well in the contest, Frederic.
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Date: 9/20/2017 1:18:00 PM
OH...you write passion well, dear. I have missed your work. Life has been hectic for me of late, but this....this is sheer beauty I'm glad I made the time to find.
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Date: 9/20/2017 12:19:00 PM
You really do the sonnet form so well.. Great romantic lines through out..
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Date: 9/20/2017 11:38:00 AM
Very nice, passionate and open expression poem Frederic. Good luck in the contest :)
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