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Under the red umbrella Faces hidden from clear rain A passionate, blazing kiss Takes away the pain From long, black, lonely days Arms were destined to hold Now, broken hearts mend In a love story to unfold 10/29/18 Entry for the red umbrella contest. Sponsor: Eve Roper Words required: Red umbrella and Rain

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Date: 10/30/2018 11:54:00 AM
A very romantic story you have painted. Heidi good luck in the contest.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/30/2018 2:57:00 PM
Thank you very much Wren :)
Date: 10/30/2018 10:46:00 AM
Always a beautiful write from you my friend!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/30/2018 11:01:00 AM
Thank you Mike. Nice to see you back :)
Date: 10/29/2018 4:31:00 PM
Your red umbrella is hot, hot, hot!!!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/29/2018 4:35:00 PM
Thank you Lyric Man ...lol. I appreciate your visit and comment ! :)
Date: 10/29/2018 3:14:00 PM
Short and sweet..a story of reconciliation ..love in the rain. Best for a win, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/29/2018 3:16:00 PM
Thanks so much Vijay. Nice to see your comment :)
Date: 10/29/2018 2:51:00 PM
So very romantic Heidi and a beautiful entry for the contest xxoo
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/29/2018 2:57:00 PM
Thank you so much for your supportive comment Mike :)
Date: 10/29/2018 2:22:00 PM
Love the 2nd stanza of this romantic write Heidi..best wishes
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/29/2018 2:23:00 PM
Thank you very much Joseph! I am happy to hear you love the 2nd stanza and I appreciate your support :)
Date: 10/29/2018 2:11:00 PM
Now this was love in its most beautiful poetic form. So very nice Heidi, this will do well in the contest.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/29/2018 2:22:00 PM
Thank you very much Chris for the kind comment and support :)
Date: 10/29/2018 2:02:00 PM
Lovely said, dear Heidi...ready for a win my friend...love & light...^WW^
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/29/2018 2:21:00 PM
Thank you very much WW. That is a nice thought ! Love & Light :)

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