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A Love Not Returned

The day was laughter and the night was romance, I always thought I’d get a begging chance- I needed him like a breath of fresh Spring air, and when I last looked he was no longer there. I wrote verses upon verses in my nighttime journal, poems of passion and a strong love so eternal- I felt a desire so intense my heart was calling, and before I knew it on my knees I was falling. See, I was surprised when I found out he had another sweet, some beautiful woman to sweep him off his feet- She must be special to catch the eye of a seraph, and here I am left alone, humiliated and embarrassed. That sunny day I told him how I truly felt with grace, and I’ll never forget the strange look upon his face- I guess I didn’t have anything to offer to his heart, and now my life drifted and my heart torn apart. I watched from afar with a crimson tear in my eye, I just couldn’t understand why he wouldn’t give us a try- I longed for his strong hand to touch mine at twilight, and share soft kisses in the middle of the night. Looking back at those moments I feel confused and ashamed, and I bet he looks back and doesn’t even remember my name. I was so young yet had fallen for someone who wouldn’t return, his love in a tender way knowing for his soul I did yearn. March 21, 2017

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Date: 4/7/2017 8:07:00 PM
Correction: "let love speak". Curtis
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Date: 4/7/2017 8:06:00 PM
Such love not returned creates some level of wound. In this piece, there is a 'power' I see in the ability to let love speak and not mourn silent in the night. Better to face a rejection than to never have known. Where appropriate, we must let let speak. Good work my friend.
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Date: 3/21/2017 6:54:00 PM
Captured well in this poem the feeling it conveys..good luck
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Date: 3/21/2017 4:58:00 PM
Laura, well done, I sure felt that yearning for love that was not returned, best wishes in the contest !
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