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A Love Dilettante

As a certified, bona fide woman of a grown-up sixteen, she light-stepped with grace thru the baroque castle. She wanted to tell her Father of the déjà vu she gleaned at last night’s élan party scene with a man who dazzled. She gave her fantasies carte blanche to freely travel for she was but a love dilettante, still romance green and unsure what her anomaly feelings could mean. She found the King, Father, leaning on an avant-garde mantel, his manner ennui, despite the cacophony of swords at cavil. Knowing her, he said, "No talk of new suiters, many already battle." ... CayCay Jennings January 25, 2018

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Date: 5/5/2018 6:37:00 PM
A fun poem CayCay. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/2/2018 10:04:00 PM
Connie says it all. Those word infusions dances into a sweet sixteen melody. Helps me to rig up something too. Its turning out to be such a beautiful summer now its hard to write though. You dont understand what the rain does to Africa! ( fat excuse for my lazIness)
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Date: 1/31/2018 2:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved high placement with this beauty CayCay! You waltzed the required words in so well! I loved it! : )
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Date: 1/30/2018 7:40:00 PM
An enchanting write CayCay. Wonderful story-telling with lovely use of the required words. Congratulations on your placement in the contest my lovely friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 1/30/2018 1:09:00 AM
This is lovely, CayCay, in content and rythmn. Congrats! Viv x
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Date: 1/29/2018 9:15:00 PM
Congrats on your placement in this contest CayCay. I personally thought your poem to be one of the very best. In other words, it made sense. ;)
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Date: 1/29/2018 2:07:00 PM
Great storytelling using your ten words CayCay, you used them very well.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest
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Date: 1/27/2018 7:37:00 PM
Caycay, I came back to see it again and I think you changed the last line and I REALLY like that line better now!! You worked the words in so well, Caycay!! Hope this poem gives you a top spot!
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Date: 1/27/2018 9:22:00 AM
Love the imagery you created, CayCay.
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Date: 1/27/2018 10:07:00 AM
Thank you so much, Line - I hope the storyline was coherent considering the form restrictions. I appreciate your visit very much. All the best ... CayCay
Date: 1/26/2018 8:56:00 PM
Caycay, I think you made very good use of these words. Though the words were some I never heard of before (for me, they were ennui and elan which I really did not know) for some reason I was able to do my poem very quickly. But not so with the sonnet I took hours to compose today!! Let me soupmail you something.
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Date: 1/26/2018 7:07:00 PM
Fun-filled!
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