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'a Love- Perpetual'

my gaze upon my sweet love is amorousness and awe I find everything about this man of mine erotic his eyes are full of hunger and yearning and my thirst for him is pure lust and desire when we are apart I am filled with disquietude as my need is both joy and misery love like this is a beautiful rapture that comes unbidden it is an infinite bond that is fragile as a blooming flower I am swept away in the fever of this passion it comes to me like wind driven storm clouds twirling and we are sent swirling on vast rolling ocean waves then, we plunge into the deep fathomless blue and we are drenched with this wild love when we are together there is an intensity and aching a vehemence fierce and bold with a captivating promise he makes me so happy and I glow with effervescence our love is growing like a wandering forest vine searching we can talk for hours and hours for time means nothing to us I have a deep respect for his opinion on all matters and he is a good listener and likes it when I read my written words and I see and feel his many admirable qualities oh, for this man I have great reverence and veneration and when he kisses my waiting lips red as wine I gasp in the knowledge that this romance we share is eternal it will endure and go on forever and will be unending I love this man with- a love- p e r p e t u a l . . . . ________________________ February 7, 2019 Poetry/Free Verse/'a love- perpetual' Copyright Protected, ID 19-1160-765-02 Submitted to the contest, Best Free Verse 2019 sponsor, John Hamilton Second Place

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Date: 7/20/2019 11:12:00 PM
Oh Dear Heart, this has not left any feeling out, for that true love.... You had such a soft subtle way of words giving life to that passionate emotion.... Making me yearn to fall in love
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Date: 6/30/2019 7:08:00 AM
Absolutely sublime, Constance:-) I thoroughly enjoyed this poem of yours, Congrats!
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Constance La France
Date: 6/30/2019 11:54:00 AM
Edward, thanks for the congrats and the sublime, I adore that word ~
Date: 6/29/2019 8:06:00 PM
Beautiful dear heart! Congrats on your win!;)
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Constance La France
Date: 6/30/2019 11:54:00 AM
Brenda, thanks for the beautiful and the congrats ~
Date: 6/29/2019 7:44:00 PM
A very touching romantic write Constance, congrats on a fine win!
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Constance La France
Date: 6/30/2019 11:55:00 AM
John, thank you so much for the contest and for my fine placement ~
Date: 6/28/2019 3:20:00 PM
So very much imagery, depth and romanticism in this exceptional piece my dear friend! So reminded me of scenes and times in my past! A fav-- a romantic jewel too...
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Constance La France
Date: 6/30/2019 11:56:00 AM
Robert, thank you for that nice comment and for the FAV !

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