A Love- Perpetual Premiere Contest Winner

my gaze upon my sweet love is amorousness and awe
I find everything about this man of mine erotic
his eyes are full of hunger and yearning
and my thirst for him is pure lust and desire

when we are apart I am filled with disquietude
as my need is both joy and misery
love like this is a beautiful rapture that comes unbidden
it is an infinite bond that is fragile as a blooming flower
I am swept away in the fervidness of this passion
it comes to us like wind driven storm clouds twirling
and we are sent swirling on vast rolling ocean waves
then, we plunge into the deep fathomless blue
and we are drenched with this wild love

when we are together there is an intensity and aching
a vehemence fierce and bold with a captivating promise
he makes me so happy and I glow with effervescence
our love is growing like a wandering forest vine searching

we can talk for hours and hours for time means nothing to us
I have a deep respect for his opinion on all matters
and he is a good listener and likes it when I read my written words
and I see and feel his many admirable qualities
oh, for this man I have great reverence and veneration

and when he kisses my waiting lips red as wine
I gasp in the knowledge that this romance we share is eternal
it will endure and go on forever and will be unending
I love this man with-   a love-   p e r p e t u a l   . . . .

________________________
February 7, 2019


Poetry/Free Verse/A Love Perpetual
Copyright Protected, ID 1112-829-02
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


Written for the $ contest, Free Verse On Love
sponsor, Lu Loo

First Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 2/24/2019 7:02:00 PM
Another amazing write Constance, congrats on another fine win!
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Date: 2/24/2019 2:00:00 PM
Wow! You definitely deserved first place! This is amazing! It was so beautifully written and all of your lines just oozing with this untethered, ambiance of lovemaking gone wild. Congratulations on a well deserved win!
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Date: 2/24/2019 1:01:00 PM
such a beautiful poem, as always sweet lady. Check your soupmail, mine works again. let me know if messenger would be easier for you, it may be easier for me. Congrats and thank you for your participation! -luloo
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Date: 2/13/2019 8:31:00 AM
The intensity in this poem is so severe! The love you have for this person is so deep and powerful in burns straight into our own hearts. If only it remains like that. Great piece.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/13/2019 9:11:00 AM
Kudzai, thank you so much for visiting my poem with that wonderful comment, appreciate ~
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