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A Lost Little Girl

She Is Twenty Six... But Inside She's A Little Girl So Lost... In An Awful Scary Past... How Does She Get Away... Where Does She Run... She Has A Daughter & A Son... She Needs To Get Out Now... She's In A Deep Dark Hole... Trying To Climb Out... Her Kids Are All She Can Think About... She Really Wants Out... She Wants To Smile... She Wants To Laugh... She Wants To Get Through... This Scary Death Trap... Please Let Her See... Please Let Her Feel....Real... Real...Inside And Out... There's Got To Be A Way Out... She Will Keep On Climbing... This Deep Dark Place... Until That Beautiful Day... She Finally Escapes... The Saddened Days And Bitter Nights... And Being Afraid Of Everything In Sight... She Will Become Strong... One Day At A Time... And Find The Light That Reaches To The Sky!

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Beata Agustin

Date: 4/27/2024 5:53:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/10/2016 12:42:00 AM

AMANDA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry, LINDA

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/15/2012 12:32:00 PM

Congratulations on your super win in Frank H's contest Amanda. Love, Carol

Amanda Fisher
Date: 3/20/2012 7:07:00 AM

Thank You So Much!!!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/15/2012 10:19:00 AM

Congratulations Amanda on a fabulous win xx

Amanda Fisher
Date: 3/20/2012 7:08:00 AM

Thank You!!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/15/2012 10:06:00 AM

congrats Amanda on a tremendous third place win for this creative entry luv..

Amanda Fisher
Date: 3/20/2012 7:08:00 AM

Thank You!!

Sashi Prabhu

Date: 3/15/2012 9:51:00 AM

congrats........great poem............ ~sashi

Amanda Fisher
Date: 3/20/2012 7:09:00 AM

Thank You!!

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 3/15/2012 9:32:00 AM

a hope filled inspiring poem coming out of the depths. wonderful Amanda. Congrtulations to you on your placement here!

Amanda Fisher
Date: 3/20/2012 7:09:00 AM

Thank You!

Craig Schaber

Date: 12/4/2011 11:29:00 AM

welcome to poetry soup nice poem hope to read more.

Amanda Fisher
Date: 3/20/2012 7:10:00 AM

Thank You!!

Edward Ebbs

Date: 12/2/2011 9:13:00 AM

Amanda, things will in time get better for and your two children that you are holding on tight to your heart...keep your head up and remember that for every storm no matter what there is a rainbow, and for every tear shed in this life is a smile. Look for the blessing in each trail, and for every problem that life sends, there is a friend you will see...maybe even here on Poetry Soup...welcome :)

Amanda Fisher
Date: 3/20/2012 7:10:00 AM

Thank You so much your words are very touching and I will keep fighting :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/30/2011 4:58:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Amanda. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

Amanda Fisher
Date: 3/20/2012 7:12:00 AM

Thank You very much Carol...... I have been finding alot of inspiration on here and I thank u so much for giving me a chance and reading my poems:)

Rene Dixon

Date: 11/29/2011 9:34:00 PM

Girl I understand this more than you know and it will get better!! Have faith it will take you a long way...

Amanda Fisher
Date: 3/20/2012 7:13:00 AM

Thank You...... Yes faith does take u a long way and its so nice to see people care and they dont even know me its nice to see.... :):)