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A Longing, a Need

I feel this desire in my loins will slowly drive me insane. Your name keeps ricocheting off the walls of my brain; The image of your voluptuous body is fuel to this fire; Only your calming touch can quench my raging desire. You play exquisite melodies on my heartstrings. Your luscious lips are a feast for kings. That heavenly body which you possess makes me so delirious. And your divine taste is purely luxurious! Patiently I wait until the next time we meet I can still taste you on my tongue and it's oh so sweet! If I close my eyes long enough, I can still feel the chills of ecstacy that is found in our love. I know you can hear my pounding heart when we embrace, And you now know my deepest passions are aroused when I see your face! *Written for Laura Mckenzies contest "A Romantic Longing" My type of contest...lol enjoyed;)

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Date: 2/15/2010 10:12:00 AM
This fantastic Sonnet has always been a winner in my book, my "JAM"! Congratulations on your win in the contest!!!! Great job, as usual! Thanks for writing it, too! One of your best, ever!! Love always, Peanut Butter, etc.LOL
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Date: 2/15/2010 5:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Laura's contest Jimmy. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/13/2010 2:00:00 PM
congratulations Jimmy on your win!
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Date: 2/13/2010 11:19:00 AM
Congrats Jimmy on your winning poem in Laura's contest.. an amazing Sonnet for a wonderful well deserved win.. enjoy your moment in the spotlight for this "beauty"..luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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Date: 2/13/2010 9:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with a very nice sonnet. Caryl
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Date: 2/13/2010 8:01:00 AM
Many congratulations Jimmy, on your win in Larua's fine contest >> James
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Date: 2/13/2010 7:27:00 AM
You sound like a very romantic and sensual man, Jimmy. Congratulations on your success in Laura's contest! Nice work. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/13/2010 7:08:00 AM
Now let me see a 15 syllable 1st line in a Sonnet you should be very happy content weighed above form. A heartfelt verse. Light & Love
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Date: 1/25/2010 6:15:00 PM
Beautiful Jimmy,Beautiful and deep,The readers can feel the longing in verse,Romantic and sensual..Charma
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Date: 1/16/2010 4:12:00 PM
one of your best!
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Date: 1/15/2010 9:01:00 PM
Once again, I'm speechless!! This is "right up your alley", Popi! I know you enjoyed writing this! I can feel it! Good luck in Laura's "A Romantic Longing" Contest! A winner for sure !! Very good as usual, Jimmy! While I'm playing this melody on your heartstring can you hear my heart going, Boom! Boom! Boom!? Listen! LOL Love you, Popi!
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Date: 1/15/2010 6:34:00 AM
Yes Wow!! Loved it so completely, so want some of that lol... oops am I allowed to say that! Good luck in the contest... I entered too!!
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