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A Little Laughter Five

Ocean trout lurks close
folks tread ocean water
trout makes fishy prank music
folks shark alert
hears scary movie theme
folks panic…scram
water guard hears trout laugh
sandy beach folks towel dance
drips, quake, shake... faint




2-20-18

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Susan Gentry Date: 3/27/2018 9:30:00 PM Congratulations on your win! Login to Reply Cheryl Hoffman Date: 3/27/2018 9:39:00 PM Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Susan; really appreciate it!~Che :)

Tom Cunningham Date: 3/27/2018 2:28:00 AM Congratulations Cheryl. Tom Login to Reply Cheryl Hoffman Date: 3/27/2018 8:18:00 AM Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Tom; really appreciate it!~Che :)

Jan Allison Date: 3/26/2018 4:30:00 PM very funny Che:-) many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Cheryl Hoffman Date: 3/26/2018 8:02:00 PM hugs che xx Cheryl Hoffman Date: 3/26/2018 8:01:00 PM Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Jan; really appreciate it!~Che :)

Eve Roper Date: 3/26/2018 7:29:00 AM Cheryl, congratulations on your win on this great piece! :) Hugs Eve Login to Reply Cheryl Hoffman Date: 3/26/2018 8:47:00 AM Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Eve; really appreciate it! hugs~Che :)

Line Gauthier Date: 3/25/2018 10:05:00 PM Congrats on your win, Cheryl. Login to Reply Cheryl Hoffman Date: 3/26/2018 8:43:00 AM Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Line; really appreciate it!~Che :)

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/25/2018 1:16:00 PM - Cheryl, congratulations so much with your fun winning poem :) - Well done :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Cheryl Hoffman Date: 3/26/2018 8:42:00 AM Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Ann-Lise; really appreciate it! hugs~Che :)

Edward Mccall Date: 3/25/2018 10:30:00 AM Good morning Cheryl how are you today? Trout makes fishy prank music! that's a great line. Congratulations on your win and thank you for taking time to enter the contest. Edward. {:-) Login to Reply Cheryl Hoffman Date: 3/26/2018 8:20:00 AM Belated Good morning Edward;Thanks so much for very kind congrats and for placing me as on of the winners Edward; really appreciate it! Thanks again!~Che :)

Constance La France Date: 2/22/2018 7:42:00 PM Cheryl, such a difficult contest to write for, best of luck with your fun poem ! Login to Reply Cheryl Hoffman Date: 2/24/2018 7:38:00 PM Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Broken Wings; really appreciate it!~Che :) PS It was difficult only being able to use five letter words, aargh! :)

Alexis Y. Date: 2/22/2018 7:50:00 AM Lol! Cheryl, This is hilarious. I enjoyed it very much.You should see the images in my head. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis Login to Reply Cheryl Hoffman Date: 2/22/2018 9:43:00 AM Thanks so much for very kind encouraging comment Alexis; Glad you enjoyed and got chuckle out of it! Appreciate it!~Che :)

Barry Stebbings Date: 2/21/2018 7:49:00 AM Ha, ha, ha, love it, Cheryl. // Barry Login to Reply Cheryl Hoffman Date: 2/21/2018 9:38:00 AM Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Barry; glad you enjoyed it! Originally I had a shark scaring them but decided to change it to a trout~appreciate the stop by!~Che :)

Tom Cunningham Date: 2/21/2018 1:53:00 AM Soon as I started reading, the theme to Jaws was playing in my head. Good luck in the contest. Tom. Login to Reply Cheryl Hoffman Date: 2/21/2018 6:54:00 AM Thats what I usually imagine hearing whenever I take an ocean dip lol! Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Tom; appreciate it!~Che :)