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A Little Bluer Please

A little bluer please a darker rim around a distant cave peering into the orange tip of sunrise. Will they see it? Well not it….but me gazing from within the depth of brushstrokes, watching them as they control the urge to touch, to feel the gentle breeze moving through motionless trees. The aura of the forest changing passersby caught lost in the shifting nuances of a brushstroke in time. ©11/9/2021 Become A Painting Poetry Contest

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Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/10/2021 8:02:00 AM

WOW! This is amazing. I so love it. Your words enchant. Beautifully done. God bless you. Love, Gina

Judy Ball

Date: 11/9/2021 3:00:00 PM

WoW! This is so descriptive. Sounds like you are one with your paintings. You put some of your SELF into it. Good Stuff! Love it. God Bless, JB

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/9/2021 1:52:00 PM

You have merged and are now one with your paintbrush, O artiste... Ommmmmm. ~ Alan Ginsberg

John Lawless
Date: 11/9/2021 8:11:00 PM

hey, not bad for a kid who grew up in the 8 crayon period.

Jenna Logan

Date: 11/9/2021 9:31:00 AM

I find your lines very descriptive of a sunrise, John. "Orange tip of sunrise..." great image.