A Little Animals View


I was dreaming of a hunting quest,
   feral, wild and untamed in a land strange;
    then, outside my fluffy fur there was a change,
the bright sun was shining into our nest.
Yawning wide and on the bed my claws-  pressed,
   I am soft dark grey and a pet of one;
   I like to prowl mice that in the house run.
Oh, on my mother's lips a kiss I pressed!

Well, I think this is my mother, anyway,
   I see her eyes flutter and she does stir;
MEOW!  Is she going to sleep all day?
   So into her right ear I loudly purr,
   I am forced to stand on her chest and plea;
   Oh! Do get up and make our tea!
Then, she hugs me close to her heart with love,
and she calls me her little turtle dove!

Mother is walking towards the kitchen,
   I zoom past her sliding on the wood floor;
   yes, ready to do my part-  to pitch in,
I know mother what dwells behind that door.
That's right, make the tea and in my bowl pour,
   yes, in my plate my yummy food place;
   and when I am all full we can play chase . . . 
So sorry, didn't mean to break your vase!

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February 1, 2017

Poetry/Personification/A Little Animals View
Copyright Protected, ID 17- 8717-80-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written Under Pseudonym.


Entered in the contest, 
Any Poem Written on your Birthday
Sponsor, Laura Loo

First Place
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For the contest, In An Animals View
Sponsor, Jamie Pan

Fourth Place

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Date: 3/15/2017 10:42:00 AM
perfect personification Broken Wings! loved it very much! :) thank you and congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 3/14/2017 10:13:00 AM
Wonderful write, Broken Wings, ... Congratulations on your win.. ~* Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/11/2017 10:15:00 AM
Excellent BW! Mind you, I can't imagine a cat being sorry for breaking a vase, or anything else they do! Love it! Congratulations! :-)
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Date: 2/3/2017 6:29:00 PM
this is cute as the dickens, Constance!! I bet it will do well! I just had to see what you came up with!!
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Date: 2/1/2017 6:23:00 PM
Very nicely done, Constance! This shall do well in the contest of that I'm sure! GL
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Constance La France
Date: 2/1/2017 7:23:00 PM
Thank you so much Wolf ~
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