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A Light Tap Upon Heaven's Door

She came unannounced A light tap upon my door Greeting me with a loving smile Sweet eyes to adore A pentacle of beauty A spirit of lasting light She shared all her precious words And calmly took flight And now we gather With silence abound Pictures within our minds And sweet memories that drown Wondering and waiting For a soft prayer of relief Still holding each precious memory In flooding tears of grief - Along the winding path of cobblestone a light Winter rain falls

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/18/2018 9:57:00 AM
back to congratulate you Rick...
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Date: 2/18/2018 9:32:00 AM
Back with congrats, Rick. A well deserved win on this emotive piece.
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Date: 2/18/2018 9:21:00 AM
Very beautiful flow and rhythm, Rick, with a melancholy but touching message. Enjoyed it very much - congrats, my friend.
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Date: 2/14/2018 4:57:00 PM
A lovely melodic read, Rick.
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Date: 2/14/2018 3:51:00 PM
Sad but lovely write Rick, well done...
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