A Life That Matters

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Shine on most brilliantly my bold, brave lass Whine no more over misgiving's past White robe awaits after crucible's blast. Write of your struggles to all whom this life batters Trite experiences included, for your testimony matters. *** Poetry form: Rhyming Morph - In this poem one letter of the first word in each line is changed - Shine, Whine, White, Write, Trite. December 10, 2019 F F I series 32 morph Brian Strand, sponsor

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Constance La France

Date: 12/10/2019 6:51:00 PM

Mark, great morph poem, and congratulations on your podium win in Brian's Blog challenge, I wrote one too, Tears and Love Morph, but for some reason he has not received it, so I resent this evening, hope he gets it, a bit different than yours !

Mark Toney
Date: 12/10/2019 11:15:00 PM

Thank you, Constance. I look forward to reading your poem. ~Mark

Na Na

Date: 12/10/2019 1:19:00 PM

Nicely put together. Thanks for sharing Mark

Mark Toney
Date: 12/10/2019 9:07:00 PM

Thanks, Gregory! ~Mark