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A Life Lesson

Sitting, cradled in the limbs of what I had determined
was the most secure outpost of childhood uncertainties,
I came to the realization that I alone had just discovered
the relationship of death to life.  This elder statesman of 
Oak, that held high court over my uncles pasture, always
provided cover and a portent for any impending incursion
to the sanctity of my domain.  But today, my old friend was
for me a teacher.  With my back to his massive trunk, he 
provided shelter from a chilly north wind that would foretell
the inevitable change that was this life lesson.  I sat 
mesmerized watching, what seemed like one at a time,
each leaf, the offspring of my guardian, as it surrendered
to the wind, cascading to its rest.  The beauty of this 
descent and the feather-like bed of honey and ginger 
pillows they formed seemed to confirm they understood
their role as keepers of warmth and revival.  It was as if no
life was ever without meaning even in its death; ever. I saw
their dignity. I, on that day, came to better understand my own. 
The complexity was so simple, as defined in his explanation. 
To my old friend and teacher, I remain in your arms 
and forever in your debt.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Callus Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 4:30 PM
I must say this is very creative, Charlie. I can relate to the experience, but I doubt if I would ever have been able to express it with your ability! I had big hollow-trunked carob trees on my g'dad's farm where I found comfort and gave vent to my fertile imagination! ~ Regards // paul
Smith Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 4:37 PM
I doubt, with the exception of some city dwellers, that there hasn't been some sort of tree experience in most young boys life and probably young girls as well. Thank you for your encouragement Paul. It is appreciated...
Dietrich Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 3:41 PM
what a deep thinking interesting poem this is, Charlie. This is original and shows thinking outside the box!
Smith Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 3:50 PM
Thank you Andrea, I do so appreciate your encouragement...
Rigoler Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 10:10 AM
A lovely an original take on an old oak tree. I wrote a poem years ago similar to this. I was a boy then and a certain space of woodland held special interests to me and my emerging since of nature's beauty. Thank you for reading about Cotton Mather, not a man after my ow heart, however. /M
Smith Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 10:46 AM
It's always a pleasure to receive words of encouragement from a reader that is someone whos work you really appreciate, as I do yours Maurice. Thank you so much...
Hunjeri Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 8:29 AM
A deep write full of memories and great life lessons
Smith Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 10:41 AM
Thank you for the visit Njeri, I hope you enjoyed the read.
Andresen Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 6:45 AM
- What a glorious poem Charlie, it has soul - I wish you a wonderful Easter - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 10:40 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise and you have a blessed day also...
La France Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 9:23 PM
Charlie, BEAUTIFUL and I do believe in tree spirits excellent write, 7 ~
Smith Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 9:43 PM
I don't believe I've written anything for PS yet, that has seemed to have stirred as much emotion. Why is that? It's not a complicated wordy, flowery emotionally deep piece. I thought it was pretty straight forward. Thank you B/W, you' re too kind.
Warrior Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 1:42 PM
There is more to trees than what appears...they hold Spirits within them that connect with us on a higher plain of consciousness...they provide for us...what do we do for them?...great write Charlie...you are one of the few poets I can read all the way through...god bless...with admiration...^WW^
Warrior Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 2:19 PM
What may seem as a small contribution to you my friend...is a Huge contribution to the Divine...you my friend, no it or not... are one of its many ambassador's...god bless...^WW^
Smith Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 1:56 PM
Wow, what a wonderful response to my small contribution to the community. I don't suppose, I know, this is why we do what we do. You've made my humble effort worth while. Thank you WW!
Jabri Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 6:34 AM
I was right into it Charlie. I've always been into this kind of works..captivating and freaking amazing...
Smith Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 9:42 AM
What a delightful response. I prefer writing a story form rather than loading the write with as many adjectives as I can conceive. But, that's just me. You are very kind, thank you...
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 2:36 AM
I love the wisdom of trees. If you listen they have much to tell. I do think of them as friends and often protectors. A wonderful poem you have created Charlie! #7 ;)
Smith Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 9:31 AM
We agree, thank you Connie, I hope you enjoyed my wee tale. Thanks for your encouragement, Charlie
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