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Sitting, cradled in the limbs of what I had determined was the most secure outpost of childhood uncertainties, I came to the realization that I alone had just discovered the relationship of death to life. This elder statesman of Oak, that held high court over my uncles pasture, always provided cover and a portent for any impending incursion to the sanctity of my domain. But today, my old friend was for me a teacher. With my back to his massive trunk, he provided shelter from a chilly north wind that would foretell the inevitable change that was this life lesson. I sat mesmerized watching, what seemed like one at a time, each leaf, the offspring of my guardian, as it surrendered to the wind, cascading to its rest. The beauty of this descent and the feather-like bed of honey and ginger pillows they formed seemed to confirm they understood their role as keepers of warmth and revival. It was as if no life was ever without meaning even in its death; ever. I saw their dignity. I, on that day, came to better understand my own. The complexity was so simple, as defined in his explanation. To my old friend and teacher, I remain in your arms and forever in your debt.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/22/2016 4:30:00 PM
I must say this is very creative, Charlie. I can relate to the experience, but I doubt if I would ever have been able to express it with your ability! I had big hollow-trunked carob trees on my g'dad's farm where I found comfort and gave vent to my fertile imagination! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 3/22/2016 4:37:00 PM
I doubt, with the exception of some city dwellers, that there hasn't been some sort of tree experience in most young boys life and probably young girls as well. Thank you for your encouragement Paul. It is appreciated...
Date: 3/22/2016 3:41:00 PM
what a deep thinking interesting poem this is, Charlie. This is original and shows thinking outside the box!
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Date: 3/22/2016 3:50:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, I do so appreciate your encouragement...
Date: 3/22/2016 10:10:00 AM
A lovely an original take on an old oak tree. I wrote a poem years ago similar to this. I was a boy then and a certain space of woodland held special interests to me and my emerging since of nature's beauty. Thank you for reading about Cotton Mather, not a man after my ow heart, however. /M
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Date: 3/22/2016 10:46:00 AM
It's always a pleasure to receive words of encouragement from a reader that is someone whos work you really appreciate, as I do yours Maurice. Thank you so much...
Date: 3/22/2016 8:29:00 AM
A deep write full of memories and great life lessons
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Date: 3/22/2016 10:41:00 AM
Thank you for the visit Njeri, I hope you enjoyed the read.
Date: 3/22/2016 6:45:00 AM
- What a glorious poem Charlie, it has soul - I wish you a wonderful Easter - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/22/2016 10:40:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise and you have a blessed day also...
Date: 3/21/2016 9:23:00 PM
Charlie, BEAUTIFUL and I do believe in tree spirits excellent write, 7 ~
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Date: 3/21/2016 9:43:00 PM
I don't believe I've written anything for PS yet, that has seemed to have stirred as much emotion. Why is that? It's not a complicated wordy, flowery emotionally deep piece. I thought it was pretty straight forward. Thank you B/W, you' re too kind.
Date: 3/21/2016 1:42:00 PM
There is more to trees than what appears...they hold Spirits within them that connect with us on a higher plain of consciousness...they provide for us...what do we do for them?...great write Charlie...you are one of the few poets I can read all the way through...god bless...with admiration...^WW^
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Date: 3/21/2016 2:19:00 PM
What may seem as a small contribution to you my friend...is a Huge contribution to the Divine...you my friend, no it or not... are one of its many ambassador's...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 3/21/2016 1:56:00 PM
Wow, what a wonderful response to my small contribution to the community. I don't suppose, I know, this is why we do what we do. You've made my humble effort worth while. Thank you WW!
Date: 3/21/2016 6:34:00 AM
I was right into it Charlie. I've always been into this kind of works..captivating and freaking amazing...
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Date: 3/21/2016 9:42:00 AM
What a delightful response. I prefer writing a story form rather than loading the write with as many adjectives as I can conceive. But, that's just me. You are very kind, thank you...
Date: 3/21/2016 2:36:00 AM
I love the wisdom of trees. If you listen they have much to tell. I do think of them as friends and often protectors. A wonderful poem you have created Charlie! #7 ;)
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Date: 3/21/2016 9:31:00 AM
We agree, thank you Connie, I hope you enjoyed my wee tale. Thanks for your encouragement, Charlie

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