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A Letter To My 16 Year-Old Self

Dear sweet sixteen drama queen: I know you don't want my advice, But shut your smart mouth and listen. The last decade has been quite a ride And I want to share my wisdom. Don't think you're above getting tickets - When you drive, keep an eye on your speed. And don't brush your teeth so roughly Or your gums will start to recede. Make time for being creative - Write and paint as much as you can. When school ends, you'll be working And time will slip through your hands. You're not immune to tragedy; Every heart is destined to break. You'll witness death, sickness, and pain, But you'll learn from every mistake. Always treat strangers with kindness - You don't know what they've endured. Be even kinder to Mum and Dad - Because YOU are what they've endured! Talk to your grandparents weekly; Ask questions, learn about the past. Your history lives within them And memories won't always last. Of all the advice I've given, I hope you'll heed this one thing: Fall in love with the good guys. With bad boys, just have a fling!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/28/2013 8:14:00 AM
What great advice! You did a great job on this one, Heather! I have been thinking that I need to write and paint more and spend more time with my Grandparents and all that. Haha! I really like the part where your parents endured you! Sounds familliar! ~Thank you so very much for your recent visit; it means more to me than you know.
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Date: 2/27/2013 1:48:00 PM
Ha...love that last line...My letter would simply read...Dear Caleb, Don't do it....
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Date: 1/8/2013 4:28:00 PM
Heather, Congratulations with your winning poem in David's awesome contest.. pd
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Date: 1/6/2013 5:42:00 PM
Congrad's on your win Light & Love
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Date: 1/5/2013 4:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win friend Heather!! It's fantastic write! Happy New Year!!:)
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Date: 1/1/2013 12:38:00 PM
Congratulations! Wishing you a Happy New Year!
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Date: 1/1/2013 7:45:00 AM
My hearty congratulations on your super win and great write my dear poet friend Heather! Happy New Year, too!
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Date: 12/31/2012 5:17:00 PM
Way to go, I really liked this one. Happy New Year!
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Date: 12/31/2012 4:31:00 PM
Heather congrats on your win, I loved the way you told yourself off...David
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Date: 12/31/2012 3:26:00 PM
Wonderful poem. Congrad's and a Happy New Yr.
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Date: 12/31/2012 2:51:00 PM
congrats on a great job!
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Date: 12/31/2012 2:16:00 PM
Big congrats Heather love, and all the best for the new year xx
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Date: 12/19/2012 12:53:00 PM
This is wonderful, if only we could go back and share wisdom with our old selves. I wonder if we would listen?? Wonderful poem.
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Date: 12/17/2012 2:12:00 PM
wow heather this is brilliant , this is my story, where were you when I needed you , just love it xx
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