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A Less Known Romance

When he comes home smiling, moon blooms, With stars, her darling kids, Yet when he far does roam, she glooms. She furls her wings and burns her ends; Without his love, she shrinks; She bends, and bends; her gloom extends. Wearing sadly a thick black shawl, Abandoning her choir, She bemoans, and him she does call. On hearing her plea, home he comes, Brighter moon does bloom, and Merrily with him, songs she hums.
[Nature] Syllabic count: 8/6/8 in each stanza Oct. 24, 2020 Writing Challenge – Tercets – Poetry Contest Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 11/3/2020 1:26:00 PM
such unusual and inventive imagery. Love it. Congrats on the win.
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 11/3/2020 4:32:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea, for this lovely comment!!
Date: 11/1/2020 7:56:00 AM
Newton, congratulations on your win in my Tercet Challenge with this wonderful write _Constance
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 11/3/2020 4:32:00 PM
Thank you so much, Lance, this great comment and the placement in your contest!!
Date: 10/31/2020 12:18:00 PM
Nice one Newt. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 10/31/2020 1:51:00 PM
Thank you so much, Linda, for your sweet comment!!
Date: 10/31/2020 12:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. :-)
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 10/31/2020 1:51:00 PM
Thank you so much, Joanna!!
Date: 10/31/2020 11:09:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 10/31/2020 1:50:00 PM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, for your kind revisit and the comment!!
Date: 10/31/2020 10:55:00 AM
Nice! Congratulations on your win!!!
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 10/31/2020 1:50:00 PM
Thank you so much, Mark!!
Date: 10/24/2020 11:03:00 AM
- ... and they lived happily ever after - a beautiful story, Newton :) - Best wishes in the contest - Have a lovely weekend ) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 10/24/2020 12:45:00 PM
The process continues from gloom to bloom, and bloom to gloom. :) Thank you so much Anne-Lise, for this lovely comment.

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