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A Leap of Faith

A gentle hush falls over the pond The crickets cease a morning song The jewel-toned feathers, swiftly flew With feathered friends, soon out of view He looks out high, from tree top place His wings must plunge on empty space The nest, a haven, he yearns to stay To take this risk another day? He fears his fate could be so bleak His courage wans, but grace he seeks With not a tender note or meek I cheer from tail to beak, my song "Take the leap, be brave, be strong!" He takes the leap, to cheers that thunder He flys, and eyes are struck with wonder With fear now banished, new courage, wise Below the earth in new disguise His wings ascend to clear blue skies He sees the world with brand new eyes His flock ahead, at last his chance To fly the heavens in timeless dance Woodland creatures...Fear of flying...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/12/2009 8:22:00 AM
Great write here, Carrie !! If only we knew what the birds feel ... smile ... what a wonderful win in Matt's contest!! Congratulations !!
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Date: 6/11/2009 6:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win.. a great poem..
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Date: 6/10/2009 5:32:00 PM
Warmest congrats Carrie on this wonderful poem placing BIG in Matt's contest! Well deserved! Love, Shar
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Date: 6/10/2009 5:23:00 PM
Wonderful writing. I''m not surprised it won a high placement in the contest. Congratulations. Joyce
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Date: 6/10/2009 2:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your 5th place win-AA
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Date: 6/6/2009 8:43:00 AM
I like! So how long has it been since you first flew? lol Really, it's like you were the one taking the leap of faith. Thanks... <><
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Date: 5/14/2009 7:54:00 PM
Again. A Norman Rockwell could sit down and do a piece of Americana reading one of your poems and never even look out the window. Vince
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Date: 5/12/2009 11:54:00 PM
Another beautiful poem Carrie. :) and thank you for your sweet comments also. Hugs!
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Date: 5/9/2009 8:41:00 PM
Carrie, beautifully written. Thank you for the warm comment on mine. Ernilando
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Date: 5/9/2009 10:07:00 AM
Wonderful flow and beautiful descriptions, I can see exactly what you are saying
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Date: 5/9/2009 8:38:00 AM
Carrie.... loved it ! what more can I say :)
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Date: 5/9/2009 1:04:00 AM
The last line is a poem in itself Carrie.Beautiful write.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 5/8/2009 2:41:00 PM
The quality and rhythm of this poem soar, Carrie! The bird in your poem is like many young people I know, afraid to leave the comfortable nest. How joyous it is when they "fly the heavens in timeless dance." Amazing poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/8/2009 11:24:00 AM
Absolutely from a perspective of passionate proximity ... I was drawn to a ring side seat to applaud this majestic write.
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Date: 5/8/2009 10:07:00 AM
Take the leap, be brave be strong...that is the key to living! Beautiful, as always you are in touch with nature. awesome, hun. :) Love, me your almost off the hook with the contest...it's over monday!
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Date: 5/8/2009 9:56:00 AM
Carrie my friend and neighbor - NOR-CAL in the house representing poetry in a most stunning way - Wonderful favorite poem - Excellent - YF4L - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 5/8/2009 9:54:00 AM
Another gem with visuals that makes me sing internally..wonderful writing..thanks for the comments on my poems and blog....Corona?...you bet....much respect, Carrie.
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