A Leap of Faith

A gentle hush falls over the pond
The crickets cease a morning song
The jewel-toned feathers, swiftly flew
With feathered friends, soon out of view
He looks out high, from tree top place
His wings must plunge on empty space
The nest, a haven, he yearns to stay
To take this risk another day?
He fears his fate could be so bleak
His courage wans, but grace he seeks
With not a tender note or meek
I cheer from tail to beak, my song
"Take the leap, be brave, be strong!"
He takes the leap, to cheers that thunder
He flys, and eyes are struck with wonder
With fear now banished, new courage, wise
Below the earth in new disguise
His wings ascend to clear blue skies
He sees the world with brand new eyes
His flock ahead, at last his chance
To fly the heavens in timeless dance



Woodland creatures...Fear of flying...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Mason Avatar
June 12, 2009 at 8:22 AM
Great write here, Carrie !! If only we knew what the birds feel ... smile ... what a wonderful win in Matt's contest!! Congratulations !!
La France Avatar
June 11, 2009 at 6:18 AM
Congratulations on your win.. a great poem..
Winter Avatar
June 10, 2009 at 5:32 PM
Warmest congrats Carrie on this wonderful poem placing BIG in Matt's contest! Well deserved! Love, Shar
Johnson Avatar
June 10, 2009 at 5:23 PM
Wonderful writing. I''m not surprised it won a high placement in the contest. Congratulations. Joyce
Hudson Avatar
June 10, 2009 at 2:55 AM
Congratulations on your 5th place win-AA
Fish Avatar
June 6, 2009 at 8:43 AM
I like! So how long has it been since you first flew? lol Really, it's like you were the one taking the leap of faith. Thanks... <><
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
May 14, 2009 at 7:54 PM
Again. A Norman Rockwell could sit down and do a piece of Americana reading one of your poems and never even look out the window. Vince
Gumbo Avatar
May 12, 2009 at 11:54 PM
Another beautiful poem Carrie. :) and thank you for your sweet comments also. Hugs!
Tugaff Avatar
May 9, 2009 at 8:41 PM
Carrie, beautifully written. Thank you for the warm comment on mine. Ernilando
Ginn Avatar
May 9, 2009 at 10:07 AM
Wonderful flow and beautiful descriptions, I can see exactly what you are saying
Williams Avatar
May 9, 2009 at 8:38 AM
Carrie.... loved it ! what more can I say :)
Strand Avatar
May 9, 2009 at 1:04 AM
The last line is a poem in itself Carrie.Beautiful write.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Devonshire Avatar
May 8, 2009 at 2:41 PM
The quality and rhythm of this poem soar, Carrie! The bird in your poem is like many young people I know, afraid to leave the comfortable nest. How joyous it is when they "fly the heavens in timeless dance." Amazing poem! Love, Carolyn
Shango Avatar
May 8, 2009 at 11:24 AM
Absolutely from a perspective of passionate proximity ... I was drawn to a ring side seat to applaud this majestic write.
Reynolds Avatar
May 8, 2009 at 10:07 AM
Take the leap, be brave be strong...that is the key to living! Beautiful, as always you are in touch with nature. awesome, hun. :) Love, me your almost off the hook with the contest...it's over monday!
Jordan Avatar
May 8, 2009 at 9:56 AM
Carrie my friend and neighbor - NOR-CAL in the house representing poetry in a most stunning way - Wonderful favorite poem - Excellent - YF4L - God Bless, MJ
Higgins Avatar
May 8, 2009 at 9:54 AM
Another gem with visuals that makes me sing internally..wonderful writing..thanks for the comments on my poems and blog....Corona?...you bet....much respect, Carrie.
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