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A Leaf's Flight

“Autumn leaves don’t fall; they fly. They take their time and wander on this, their only chance to soar.” Owens, Delia. Where the Crawdads Sing, Chapter 17: “Crossing the Threshold” (p. 124).


Sheltered within my mother’s caring limbs Through spring, summer, and autumn I felt secure all through the changing seasons Happy I was with my siblings Playing, giggling, and whispering But when I watch birds flying in the air And the blue of the sky peeking through clouds Instinctively I long to fly aloft Into the enormity of a realm with no boundaries I don’t know why I feel sometimes Trapped in a jungle, so stuck and stranded Pinned down in an awful fixation Then I hunger to be a bird, spread my wings, And ride upon the wind to join in an odyssey Once when I announced my desire to my mother, She said, “you are now mature enough To free yourself from my sheltering clasp, so, I let you go” Thus, from my caged existence, here I go Slipping away from the cords that bind Swaying and dancing on silvered wings Jan.4.2023 ~ Placed Second~ Feel Free Poetry Contest Sponsor- Sara Kendrick
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Roper Avatar
January 7, 2023 at 3:29 PM
Back with congratulations on your win in Sara Kendrick contest. Blessings my friend
Poet Avatar
January 7, 2023 at 8:14 AM
Back with Congratulations on your contest win, Valsa. Blessings
Goldsmith Avatar
January 7, 2023 at 7:29 AM
Back with Congratulation on your win. Let's fly far away. One leaf said to the other leaf. Have a blessed day/weekend.................
Gasun Avatar
January 6, 2023 at 9:27 PM
Such an excellent poem my dear friend Valsa. I love so much the personification and journey of the leaf in your poem. Congratulations on your win! Thank you so much for sharing. God bless you always. Hugs
Kendrick Avatar
January 6, 2023 at 12:46 PM
I have read your contest entry and found it to be delightful. I like the homey, loving feel to this one. Thank you for participating. Sara
Peck Avatar
January 7, 2023 at 9:11 AM
Beautiful poem, Valsa. "swaying and dancing on silvered wings"
Goldsmith Avatar
January 6, 2023 at 11:28 AM
A wonderful write. Your leaf can fly like a bird up in the blue sky. Have a blessed day/weekend................
Wolf Avatar
January 5, 2023 at 3:35 PM
The psyche of a leaf! ... Maybe the 'ribs' of the leaf's skeleton are clues to her journey.
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January 5, 2023 at 2:56 AM
Great personification on a leaf. Excellent verse dear Valsa.
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January 4, 2023 at 9:08 PM
Beautiful, oh Ye leaf you are protected from all harm that comes your way , there are a lot of distractions and deception that comes your way, those silver wings are being formed every moment until the day you are free to soar , you will not fall for the wind shall take you to the skies : )
Tor Avatar
January 4, 2023 at 8:57 PM
You bring the leaf to life lovely theme and Poetry my Dear...
Poet Avatar
January 4, 2023 at 2:23 PM
Amazingly moving visuals in this poem, Valsa. I agree wholeheartedly with your interpretation of this statement. Sending best wishes for a prosperous new year. Excellent work, especially the last twist! Best wishes for the contest: A winner
Legros Kelley Avatar
January 4, 2023 at 11:14 AM
So pretty Valsa! Such a lovely and sweet personification of a leaf, freely fluttering away! <3
Roper Avatar
January 4, 2023 at 10:41 AM
Valsa, great imagery with deep emotions. Love your thoughts of the phrase. May your year be full of blessings.
Pandit Avatar
January 4, 2023 at 6:29 AM
Your poem gives voice to the leaf flying free--joyous--colorful--beautiful--as autumn always is. Best to you, Valsa.
Daniel Avatar
January 4, 2023 at 6:19 AM
Brilliant writing, Valsa, love the ending:)
Delaney Avatar
January 4, 2023 at 6:04 AM
Love your leaf story, Valsa: Off into the wild blue. SuZ
Cunningham Avatar
January 4, 2023 at 5:11 AM
You discribed it well Valsa, the life journey of the leaf. Best of luck in the contest. Tom
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