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“Autumn leaves don’t fall; they fly. They take their time and wander on this, their only chance to soar.” Owens, Delia. Where the Crawdads Sing, Chapter 17: “Crossing the Threshold” (p. 124).
Sheltered within my mother’s caring limbs Through spring, summer, and autumn I felt secure all through the changing seasons Happy I was with my siblings Playing, giggling, and whispering But when I watch birds flying in the air And the blue of the sky peeking through clouds Instinctively I long to fly aloft Into the enormity of a realm with no boundaries I don’t know why I feel sometimes Trapped in a jungle, so stuck and stranded Pinned down in an awful fixation Then I hunger to be a bird, spread my wings, And ride upon the wind to join in an odyssey Once when I announced my desire to my mother, She said, “you are now mature enough To free yourself from my sheltering clasp, so, I let you go” Thus, from my caged existence, here I go Slipping away from the cords that bind Swaying and dancing on silvered wings Jan.4.2023 ~ Placed Second~ Feel Free Poetry Contest Sponsor- Sara Kendrick

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Date: 1/7/2023 3:29:00 PM
Back with congratulations on your win in Sara Kendrick contest. Blessings my friend
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Date: 1/7/2023 8:14:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your contest win, Valsa. Blessings
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Date: 1/7/2023 7:29:00 AM
Back with Congratulation on your win. Let's fly far away. One leaf said to the other leaf. Have a blessed day/weekend.................
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Date: 1/6/2023 9:27:00 PM
Such an excellent poem my dear friend Valsa. I love so much the personification and journey of the leaf in your poem. Congratulations on your win! Thank you so much for sharing. God bless you always. Hugs
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Date: 1/6/2023 12:46:00 PM
I have read your contest entry and found it to be delightful. I like the homey, loving feel to this one. Thank you for participating. Sara
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Date: 1/7/2023 9:11:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Valsa. "swaying and dancing on silvered wings"
Date: 1/6/2023 11:28:00 AM
A wonderful write. Your leaf can fly like a bird up in the blue sky. Have a blessed day/weekend................
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Date: 1/5/2023 3:35:00 PM
The psyche of a leaf! ... Maybe the 'ribs' of the leaf's skeleton are clues to her journey.
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Date: 1/5/2023 2:56:00 AM
Great personification on a leaf. Excellent verse dear Valsa.
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Date: 1/4/2023 9:08:00 PM
Beautiful, oh Ye leaf you are protected from all harm that comes your way , there are a lot of distractions and deception that comes your way, those silver wings are being formed every moment until the day you are free to soar , you will not fall for the wind shall take you to the skies : )
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Date: 1/4/2023 8:57:00 PM
You bring the leaf to life lovely theme and Poetry my Dear...
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Date: 1/4/2023 2:23:00 PM
Amazingly moving visuals in this poem, Valsa. I agree wholeheartedly with your interpretation of this statement. Sending best wishes for a prosperous new year. Excellent work, especially the last twist! Best wishes for the contest: A winner
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Date: 1/4/2023 11:14:00 AM
So pretty Valsa! Such a lovely and sweet personification of a leaf, freely fluttering away! <3
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Date: 1/4/2023 10:41:00 AM
Valsa, great imagery with deep emotions. Love your thoughts of the phrase. May your year be full of blessings.
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Date: 1/4/2023 6:29:00 AM
Your poem gives voice to the leaf flying free--joyous--colorful--beautiful--as autumn always is. Best to you, Valsa.
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Date: 1/4/2023 6:19:00 AM
Brilliant writing, Valsa, love the ending:)
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Date: 1/4/2023 6:04:00 AM
Love your leaf story, Valsa: Off into the wild blue. SuZ
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Date: 1/4/2023 5:11:00 AM
You discribed it well Valsa, the life journey of the leaf. Best of luck in the contest. Tom
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