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A Late Summer's Child - By Age One

As a child born late summer, my senses were first flooded by the images, sounds and smells of fall. Was I aware of orange pumpkins, wind caressing the bright leaves, and smells of pies? I must have known the cold of wintertime. Did I marvel to see my first snowflakes and feel them too falling on my skin? Christmas would have been in the air – pine scents and sounds of carols. The wonder of spring coming surely had brought me delight. My soul was growing then in many ways. Did I toddle in sunlight, looking at pretty flowers nodding in a cool breeze? Summer’s advent would have brought my first experience with sweltering days and perhaps a parade! Did my eyes widen to see fireworks burst in night’s sky? Did I wade along sea’s shore? By age one (not knowingly) I’d have learned much about life.

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Date: 10/2/2023 6:10:00 AM
Congrats. SK
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Date: 10/1/2023 8:15:00 AM
what a wonderful nostalgic write Andrea i can recall things from about aged 2 not before:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/1/2023 7:53:00 AM
An interesting trip Andrea. I hadn't really thought about those very early months. I quite like this. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 9/30/2023 1:35:00 PM
Congratulations, Andrea! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest. Beautiful work, my friend, Emile.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/30/2023 9:06:00 PM
Thanks so much, Emile
Date: 9/9/2023 8:00:00 PM
Great scenes here Andrea, alive and vibrant Great to read .'
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Date: 9/9/2023 2:34:00 PM
I love this lovely poem dear Andrea full of gorgeous imagery, sights, sounds. So well written. Captivating as one goes through the seasons. Delightful. By the way, September is also my birthday month. Fellow Virgo? Or Libra? Thank you for sharing. So enjoyed it as always. Blessings to you.
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Date: 9/9/2023 1:31:00 PM
A real treat for us in its transition of each stage. Imagery and nostalgia excite an emotional part of us. I really like the quest, parasol rainbow, and merry go round. Lovely write.
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Date: 9/9/2023 2:10:00 AM
Pity we have to grow and lose the art of toddling in the sunshine. Your description of the Fall is captivating. Hugs.
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Date: 9/8/2023 3:14:00 PM
I wonder if my love of Fall has anything to do with being born in the Fall. Love the cool weather, the sweaters, the refreshing air… Great read, dear Andrea!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/8/2023 3:34:00 PM
I bet it does. I love summer but also September. My birthday month offers the best of summer and fall.
Date: 9/8/2023 10:42:00 AM
I don't know if I remember anything around being one year old. Eyes were wide open, did not know what I saw. Nice poem though, well envisioned.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/8/2023 3:33:00 PM
I don't remember but I wonder if our brains are processing these things somehow!!

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