A Kiss Remembered Whatever

Beyond fair reason, I shall think of you

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Susan Ashley

Date: 12/15/2023 5:50:00 PM

Frederic, dear friend, dear poet, your opening line is intriguing and kindles the heart and imagination to know more... perhaps the remembered romance of the one that got away? A beautiful verse. Congratulations for your excellent win in Suzette's contest. It's a wonderful honor to share the podium with you, Frederic. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Silent One

Date: 12/11/2023 10:37:00 AM

Sounds lovely Frederic..

Ink Empress

Date: 12/11/2023 3:40:00 AM

Thats such an evocative first liner. Loved it: so touching and heartfelt. Just one line from your poem speaks volumes too. Pleasure reading this. Goodluck