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This Or That, Vol 29 Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh

written 12/12/2024

A Kiss In The Dark -POTD


A Kiss In The Dark

You light up in the darkness
With the Heaven woven stars
In velvet tones of stillness
I calmly watch; night is ours.

Chill wind swirled rhythmic chanting,
Cocoon those well-chosen words,
Pleasing closeness, enchanting
A taste of natural bloom.

Closed eyes met a world of dreams
amorous scene into dance
A kiss in the limpid dark.
Warm silence serenaded.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Ibeh Avatar
December 29, 2024 at 4:45 PM
Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest with this excellent poem, Eve. It's magical. Beautiful imagery, too. I can see why it won POTD. Wishing you a Happy New Year!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 16, 2024 at 1:55 PM
Congrats on POTD, Eve! Love the alliteration and romance!
Rodgers Avatar
December 16, 2024 at 9:08 AM
Ohh Dear Eve, You brought me right to the scene and the words just filled my senses. So full of love and romance which makes it the perfect POTD! Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Nicole Avatar
December 14, 2024 at 7:11 PM
' Cocoon those well-chosen words, a taste of natural bloom. ' So elegant and graceful, yet soft and romantic. In that moment, silence is sweet. This is beautiful in every way. Congratulations Eve, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Roper Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 5:34 PM
Thank you, Brandy, for your encouraging words and congratulations. Happy Holidays to you and your family
Anaya Avatar
December 14, 2024 at 1:02 PM
Romance's aura is in the air, dear Eve. You've taken us there in a beautiful "amorous scene into dance" Congratulations on a POTD! Much love ~Anaya
Roper Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 5:35 PM
Thank you, I Am Anaya, for your encouraging words and congratulations. Happy Holidays to you and your family
Bartley Avatar
December 14, 2024 at 11:32 AM
Wow, sounds romantic. Very worthy POTD! Thanks for sharing!
Roper Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 5:35 PM
Thank you, Benjamin, for your encouraging words and congratulations. Happy Holidays to you and your family
May Avatar
December 14, 2024 at 11:18 AM
Lovely write Eve, Congrats on POTD
Roper Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 5:36 PM
Thank you, Joseph, for the congratulations. Happy Holidays to you and your family
Goldsmith Avatar
December 14, 2024 at 10:49 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. "A Kiss In The Dark" is a lovely write. Have a wonderful day with your win.............................
Roper Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 5:36 PM
Thank you, Paula, for your encouraging words and congratulations. Happy Holidays to you and your family
Tor Avatar
December 14, 2024 at 10:15 AM
Eve congratulations on receiving such a high Honor of POTD. Your romantic piece was to be admire for it's romantic overtones. God bless you...
Roper Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 5:37 PM
Thank you, Michael, for your encouraging words and the congratulations my friend. Happy Holidays to you and your family
Jayasankar Avatar
December 14, 2024 at 7:34 AM
Such a beautiful romantic write dear Eve. Congratulations on your potd honor... Hugs... ~ Ani
Roper Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 5:37 PM
Thank you, Anitha, for your encouraging words and congratulations. Happy Holidays to you and your family
Meadows Avatar
December 14, 2024 at 6:58 AM
A beautiful poem. Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.
Roper Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 5:38 PM
Thank you, Daisy, for the congratulations. Happy Holidays to you and your family
Williams Avatar
December 14, 2024 at 4:49 AM
A lovely way to finish the weekend dear Eve, with a POTD - and romantic sentiments. Congratulations. Hugs Maria
Roper Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 5:38 PM
Thank you, Maria, for your encouraging words and congratulations. Happy Holidays to you and your family
Kitchin Avatar
December 14, 2024 at 4:17 AM
Eve, a beautiful poem, congratulations on POTD.
Roper Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 5:38 PM
Thank you, Tania, for your encouraging words and congratulations. Happy Holidays to you and your family
Gifford Avatar
December 14, 2024 at 2:04 AM
Congratulations Eve, on your POTD win. This is a beautifully romantic piece. Have a great weekend.
Roper Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 5:39 PM
Thank you, Zyrool, for your encouraging words and congratulations. You as will have a great weekend & Happy Holidays to you and your family
Andresen Avatar
December 14, 2024 at 1:52 AM
- Back with congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Eve :) - hugs
Roper Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 5:40 PM
Thank you,Sunshine, for the congratulations. Happy Holidays to you and your family
Jones Avatar
December 14, 2024 at 1:18 AM
Lovely potd congratulations Eve.
Roper Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 5:40 PM
Thank you, Karen, for the congratulations. Happy Holidays to you and your family
Seeker Avatar
December 14, 2024 at 1:05 AM
Very romantic! Warmest congratulations on POTD with this exquisite write, Eve
Roper Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 5:41 PM
Thank you, Unseeking, for your encouraging words and congratulations. Happy Holidays to you and your family
Edmonds  Avatar
December 14, 2024 at 12:57 AM
Beautiful poetry Eve, congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
Roper Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 5:41 PM
Thank you, Beryl, for your encouraging words and congratulations. Happy Holidays to you and your family
Cunningham Avatar
December 14, 2024 at 12:31 AM
Back with congratulations to you Eve on the honour of POTD. Have a lovely weekend. Tom
Roper Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 5:42 PM
Thank you, Tom, for coming back and congratulations. Happy Holidays to you and your family
Proxenos Avatar
December 13, 2024 at 8:05 AM
Very sentimental and touching my friend.. How is your grandson. Our little bundle oj joy turned two years old last week, what joy she has brought Elias and I. Wishing you a blessed Christmas dear Eve. I'm sorry i missed sending you a couple of my children poems, I only knew because I answered one of Sara's poems, and saw your comment to her, never mind next year i hope. xx
Roper Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 5:44 PM
Thank you, Jennifer. My grandson is doing great, he is going through difficult times in school because children and some adults don't understand autism; but he seems to rub it off. Happy Holidays to you and your family
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December 13, 2024 at 2:24 AM
Wow, what an enchanting piece this is, dear Eve. The magic in your words never fades, it's so lovely to be reading your work today... "With the Heaven woven stars In velvet tones of stillness" Ahh, those beginning lines are breathtaking! Such a beautiful ambience of romance and love you've carefully knitted here. Gorgeously done! Best wishes for the contest, sending you light always ~
Roper Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 5:45 PM
Thank you, Hiya, for your encouraging words s. Happy Holidays to you and your family
Andresen Avatar
December 13, 2024 at 2:06 AM
- "A taste of natural bloom" ... beautiful and romantic, Eve :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Roper Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 5:46 PM
Thank you, Sunshine, for your encouraging and best wishes.. Happy Holidays to you and your family
Cunningham Avatar
December 13, 2024 at 1:01 AM
Quite a romantic verse Eve, best of luck in the contest. Have a lovely weekend. Tom
Roper Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 5:46 PM
Thank you,Tom, for your encouraging words. Happy Holidays to you and your family
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