A Kiss In The Dark -POTD

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This Or That, Vol 29 Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh

written 12/12/2024


A Kiss In The Dark

You light up in the darkness
With the Heaven woven stars
In velvet tones of stillness
I calmly watch; night is ours.

Chill wind swirled rhythmic chanting,
Cocoon those well-chosen words,
Pleasing closeness, enchanting
A taste of natural bloom.

Closed eyes met a world of dreams
amorous scene into dance
A kiss in the limpid dark.
Warm silence serenaded.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 12/29/2024 4:45:00 PM
Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest with this excellent poem, Eve. It's magical. Beautiful imagery, too. I can see why it won POTD. Wishing you a Happy New Year!
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Date: 12/16/2024 1:55:00 PM
Congrats on POTD, Eve! Love the alliteration and romance!
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Date: 12/16/2024 9:08:00 AM
Ohh Dear Eve, You brought me right to the scene and the words just filled my senses. So full of love and romance which makes it the perfect POTD! Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 12/14/2024 7:11:00 PM
' Cocoon those well-chosen words, a taste of natural bloom. ' So elegant and graceful, yet soft and romantic. In that moment, silence is sweet. This is beautiful in every way. Congratulations Eve, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 12/15/2024 5:34:00 PM
Thank you, Brandy, for your encouraging words and congratulations. Happy Holidays to you and your family
Date: 12/14/2024 1:02:00 PM
Romance's aura is in the air, dear Eve. You've taken us there in a beautiful "amorous scene into dance" Congratulations on a POTD! Much love ~Anaya
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Date: 12/15/2024 5:35:00 PM
Thank you, I Am Anaya, for your encouraging words and congratulations. Happy Holidays to you and your family
Date: 12/14/2024 11:32:00 AM
Wow, sounds romantic. Very worthy POTD! Thanks for sharing!
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Date: 12/15/2024 5:35:00 PM
Thank you, Benjamin, for your encouraging words and congratulations. Happy Holidays to you and your family
Date: 12/14/2024 11:18:00 AM
Lovely write Eve, Congrats on POTD
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Date: 12/15/2024 5:36:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph, for the congratulations. Happy Holidays to you and your family
Date: 12/14/2024 10:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. "A Kiss In The Dark" is a lovely write. Have a wonderful day with your win.............................
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Date: 12/15/2024 5:36:00 PM
Thank you, Paula, for your encouraging words and congratulations. Happy Holidays to you and your family
Date: 12/14/2024 10:15:00 AM
Eve congratulations on receiving such a high Honor of POTD. Your romantic piece was to be admire for it's romantic overtones. God bless you...
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Date: 12/15/2024 5:37:00 PM
Thank you, Michael, for your encouraging words and the congratulations my friend. Happy Holidays to you and your family
Date: 12/14/2024 7:34:00 AM
Such a beautiful romantic write dear Eve. Congratulations on your potd honor... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 12/15/2024 5:37:00 PM
Thank you, Anitha, for your encouraging words and congratulations. Happy Holidays to you and your family
Date: 12/14/2024 6:58:00 AM
A beautiful poem. Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.
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Date: 12/15/2024 5:38:00 PM
Thank you, Daisy, for the congratulations. Happy Holidays to you and your family
Date: 12/14/2024 4:49:00 AM
A lovely way to finish the weekend dear Eve, with a POTD - and romantic sentiments. Congratulations. Hugs Maria
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Date: 12/15/2024 5:38:00 PM
Thank you, Maria, for your encouraging words and congratulations. Happy Holidays to you and your family
Date: 12/14/2024 4:17:00 AM
Eve, a beautiful poem, congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 12/15/2024 5:38:00 PM
Thank you, Tania, for your encouraging words and congratulations. Happy Holidays to you and your family
Date: 12/14/2024 2:04:00 AM
Congratulations Eve, on your POTD win. This is a beautifully romantic piece. Have a great weekend.
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Date: 12/15/2024 5:39:00 PM
Thank you, Zyrool, for your encouraging words and congratulations. You as will have a great weekend & Happy Holidays to you and your family
Date: 12/14/2024 1:52:00 AM
- Back with congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Eve :) - hugs
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Date: 12/15/2024 5:40:00 PM
Thank you,Sunshine, for the congratulations. Happy Holidays to you and your family
Date: 12/14/2024 1:18:00 AM
Lovely potd congratulations Eve.
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Date: 12/15/2024 5:40:00 PM
Thank you, Karen, for the congratulations. Happy Holidays to you and your family
Date: 12/14/2024 1:05:00 AM
Very romantic! Warmest congratulations on POTD with this exquisite write, Eve
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Date: 12/15/2024 5:41:00 PM
Thank you, Unseeking, for your encouraging words and congratulations. Happy Holidays to you and your family
Date: 12/14/2024 12:57:00 AM
Beautiful poetry Eve, congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
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Date: 12/15/2024 5:41:00 PM
Thank you, Beryl, for your encouraging words and congratulations. Happy Holidays to you and your family
Date: 12/14/2024 12:31:00 AM
Back with congratulations to you Eve on the honour of POTD. Have a lovely weekend. Tom
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Date: 12/15/2024 5:42:00 PM
Thank you, Tom, for coming back and congratulations. Happy Holidays to you and your family
Date: 12/13/2024 8:05:00 AM
Very sentimental and touching my friend.. How is your grandson. Our little bundle oj joy turned two years old last week, what joy she has brought Elias and I. Wishing you a blessed Christmas dear Eve. I'm sorry i missed sending you a couple of my children poems, I only knew because I answered one of Sara's poems, and saw your comment to her, never mind next year i hope. xx
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Date: 12/15/2024 5:44:00 PM
Thank you, Jennifer. My grandson is doing great, he is going through difficult times in school because children and some adults don't understand autism; but he seems to rub it off. Happy Holidays to you and your family
Date: 12/13/2024 2:24:00 AM
Wow, what an enchanting piece this is, dear Eve. The magic in your words never fades, it's so lovely to be reading your work today... "With the Heaven woven stars In velvet tones of stillness" Ahh, those beginning lines are breathtaking! Such a beautiful ambience of romance and love you've carefully knitted here. Gorgeously done! Best wishes for the contest, sending you light always ~
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Date: 12/15/2024 5:45:00 PM
Thank you, Hiya, for your encouraging words s. Happy Holidays to you and your family
Date: 12/13/2024 2:06:00 AM
- "A taste of natural bloom" ... beautiful and romantic, Eve :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 12/15/2024 5:46:00 PM
Thank you, Sunshine, for your encouraging and best wishes.. Happy Holidays to you and your family
Date: 12/13/2024 1:01:00 AM
Quite a romantic verse Eve, best of luck in the contest. Have a lovely weekend. Tom
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/15/2024 5:46:00 PM
Thank you,Tom, for your encouraging words. Happy Holidays to you and your family
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