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A Kiss In My Dream

...Stars shine soft, The kiss, yours Ablaze,deep,eyes lull Eternal...

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Mark Goodson

Date: 2/7/2013 12:15:00 PM

Very poetic, A Kiss In My Dream. Thank you for your coments on my poetry page too.

Seren Roberts

Date: 1/6/2013 2:25:00 AM

Am trying new forms just looked up this one to contemplate trying next. yours is a good example. Thank you...Seren

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/23/2012 10:11:00 AM

So pretty, Mehnaz.

Mehnaz Veetil
Date: 12/25/2012 9:50:00 AM

Thank you Andrea

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/23/2012 8:29:00 AM

Thank you it even looks like a little Christmas tree. I am unfamiliar with this style but I enjoyed your Poem.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/21/2012 10:40:00 PM

Mehnaz, stopping by with my warmest thoughts~ my best wishes go out to you and your family. Have yourself a Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year* Always & Forever ;-) PD

Mehnaz Veetil
Date: 12/25/2012 9:49:00 AM

Thank You PD for the love and support you give ...Wish you a great Christmas and a happy new year....love,Mehnaz

Eileen Manassian

Date: 12/9/2012 11:59:00 PM

What an enchanted moment! Lovely! Hugs!

Mehnaz Veetil
Date: 12/19/2012 12:14:00 AM

Yes, I know.. Thanks for stopping by,

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/9/2012 1:43:00 PM

Nice to read your write today, Light & Love

Mehnaz Veetil
Date: 12/19/2012 12:14:00 AM

thank you Debbie. Mehnaz

Constance La France

Date: 12/9/2012 8:38:00 AM

Mehnaz, this is a beautiful poem, I like this form Cinquain, I must give it a try. I so enjoyed reading your poetry today. Constance

Mehnaz Veetil
Date: 12/19/2012 12:15:00 AM

thank you ....you made my day, Mehnaz