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After dark, it's just jam and disarray. Like the rain of wet stars upon the moon. Determine how to pinpoint a highway. After dark, it's just jam and disarray. Such as stained glass and silver gold to buy My spirit will be full of wind whirls, soon. After dark, it's just jam and disarray. Like the rain of wet stars upon the moon.
Written: April 26, 2023

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Date: 4/27/2023 11:43:00 AM
- A lot can happen after dark... an interesting poem, wonderfully written, Las :) - hugs
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Date: 4/27/2023 6:43:00 AM
You have portrayed a dreamy night with wonderful images. A great triolet, dear friend.
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Date: 4/27/2023 5:57:00 AM
Reminiscing with stellar imagery my friend. A world after dark.
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Date: 4/26/2023 7:45:00 PM
Sotto, Such nice lightness in this poem's dreamy night. Very nice to find a Triolet in evening. -Richard
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