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A Jealous Love

They say the gods do not subtract from man the portion of his life spent sailing ships, but she, the sea, brings ruin to ill plans. Though harsh, this raucous mistress well equips the one who seeks her true, with all his heart; a bond is forged that naught else does eclipse. To plumb her depths, to know, without a chart, her crevasses, the cycle of her tides… A jealous love, she’ll not abide apart. Take care, o man, in making her your bride! How glorious, to glide her bosom’s swell; Let diligence and honor be your guides. The man who faithful tends her, chooses well, but woe befalls the careless infidel. ————— for the Five Stanza Terza Rima Poetry Contest sponsored by Milton Hankins written 07/14/2022

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Date: 8/5/2022 5:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest. Oh, the wrath of sailing on a jealous sea~nicely penned! :)Paulette
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Date: 8/3/2022 1:43:00 AM
Your poem seemed to have the rhythm of the waves flowing effortlessly from line to line. An excellent winning Terza Rima! Congratulations on your deserving win. My late husband loved the sea but stuck to surfing, which I was thankful for. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 8/2/2022 9:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. "A Jealous Love" is a wonderful write. Have a great/blessed day writing away....... .......................
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Date: 8/2/2022 9:03:00 AM
Jeff, I am a sucker for good sea and ships poem. Congratulations on your podium placement in my terza rima contest. Good writing!
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 8/2/2022 10:34:00 AM
Thanks, Milt! And thanks for hosting the contest. I have been away a while here lately… something something potting sheds…
Date: 8/1/2022 4:35:00 AM
Yes, woe befalls the careless infidel
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Date: 7/18/2022 7:38:00 AM
I love the open seas. Great personification Jeff! Linda
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Date: 7/15/2022 3:24:00 PM
An excellent Terza Rima, Jeff, based on a subject that has always interested me.
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Date: 7/15/2022 5:32:00 AM
Sea has a magic charm and it casts its spell on many. But unless it is treated with care and caution, it might spell one's doom ! Brilliantly portrayed ! All the Best in the contest Jeff !
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 7/15/2022 5:41:00 AM
Thanks, Valsa. It is majestic and awe-inspiring, indeed!
Date: 7/14/2022 8:01:00 PM
A brilliant analogy, O Gifted One. Stunning in its applicability. Thanks, Gershon
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 7/14/2022 8:13:00 PM
Thanks for your kind words, and have a great evening!
Date: 7/14/2022 10:51:00 AM
I've never had a "thing" for the sea, but I think I can well understand its attraction for those who do. Very nice, Jeff.
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 7/14/2022 10:58:00 AM
My father was such a man - he loved the ocean. We got dragged around a lot, but I do have fond memories, and a lasting awareness that it is not to be toyed with.
Date: 7/14/2022 9:59:00 AM
Brilliant! Beautiful poetry! As good as any ever written. Love it! You get a "FAV!" from me.
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 7/14/2022 10:06:00 AM
You are too kind, sir. Thanks, and I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 7/14/2022 9:16:00 AM
This had me flashing back to the poem that starts "I must go down to the sea again" Nicely done Jeff
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 7/14/2022 10:06:00 AM
Thank you, John!

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