A Jealous Love

They say the gods do not subtract from man
the portion of his life spent sailing ships,
but she, the sea, brings ruin to ill plans.

Though harsh, this raucous mistress well equips
the one who seeks her true, with all his heart;
a bond is forged that naught else does eclipse.

To plumb her depths, to know, without a chart,
her crevasses, the cycle of her tides…
A jealous love, she’ll not abide apart.

Take care, o man, in making her your bride!
How glorious, to glide her bosom’s swell;
Let diligence and honor be your guides.

The man who faithful tends her, chooses well,
but woe befalls the careless infidel.

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for the Five Stanza Terza Rima Poetry Contest
sponsored by Milton Hankins
written 07/14/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Calasibetta Avatar
August 5, 2022 at 5:01 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest. Oh, the wrath of sailing on a jealous sea~nicely penned! :)Paulette
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 3, 2022 at 1:43 AM
Your poem seemed to have the rhythm of the waves flowing effortlessly from line to line. An excellent winning Terza Rima! Congratulations on your deserving win. My late husband loved the sea but stuck to surfing, which I was thankful for. Blessings xxoo
Goldsmith Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 9:25 AM
Congratulations on your win. "A Jealous Love" is a wonderful write. Have a great/blessed day writing away....... .......................
Hankins Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 9:03 AM
Jeff, I am a sucker for good sea and ships poem. Congratulations on your podium placement in my terza rima contest. Good writing!
Kyser Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 10:34 AM
Thanks, Milt! And thanks for hosting the contest. I have been away a while here lately… something something potting sheds…
Mwashighadi Avatar
August 1, 2022 at 4:35 AM
Yes, woe befalls the careless infidel
Fowler Avatar
July 18, 2022 at 7:38 AM
I love the open seas. Great personification Jeff! Linda
Logan Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 3:24 PM
An excellent Terza Rima, Jeff, based on a subject that has always interested me.
George Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 5:32 AM
Sea has a magic charm and it casts its spell on many. But unless it is treated with care and caution, it might spell one's doom ! Brilliantly portrayed ! All the Best in the contest Jeff !
Kyser Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 5:41 AM
Thanks, Valsa. It is majestic and awe-inspiring, indeed!
Wolf Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 8:01 PM
A brilliant analogy, O Gifted One. Stunning in its applicability. Thanks, Gershon
Kyser Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 8:13 PM
Thanks for your kind words, and have a great evening!
Slaughter Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 10:51 AM
I've never had a "thing" for the sea, but I think I can well understand its attraction for those who do. Very nice, Jeff.
Kyser Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 10:58 AM
My father was such a man - he loved the ocean. We got dragged around a lot, but I do have fond memories, and a lasting awareness that it is not to be toyed with.
DiMino Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 9:59 AM
Brilliant! Beautiful poetry! As good as any ever written. Love it! You get a "FAV!" from me.
Kyser Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 10:06 AM
You are too kind, sir. Thanks, and I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
Lawless Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 9:16 AM
This had me flashing back to the poem that starts "I must go down to the sea again" Nicely done Jeff
Kyser Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 10:06 AM
Thank you, John!
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