A Hundred Silent Ways

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I find you in the place of tears baby,
You never saw the azure sky above;
Beneath the soil all these sad years,
I do not speak in words but thoughts.

     Only one word engraved,
     Baby, no name, no date;
     I am sorry my little one,
            I was so very young myself.

Your father faded from the reality,
Of a girl who would have his child;
And then you were born and died,
My parents had you buried quickly.

    They thought to protect, 
    No name, no date at all;
    And for all these years,
          I have talked to you silently.

I speak to you often my little son,
Dreaming of what could have been;
I contemplate a life with a little boy,
A hundred times a day without words.

    And it is time for me,
    To honor your name;   
    Engrave it in the stone,
          It is time my sweet baby son.

                     "It is time to correct the past  . . ."


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May 1, 2015


Poetry/Verse/plus one line/ A Hundred Silent Ways
Copyright Protected, ID 05-558-375-01
All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France

Written for the Standard contest, Contemplation- Rumi, Visual #1
sponsor, Mystic Rose, Judged 2015

Second Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/12/2015 5:37:00 PM
Hurrah, a very well deserved win, lady. Congrats.
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Date: 5/12/2015 3:00:00 PM
Congrats on your winning emotive work..Many women share this lose and emotion with you..Sara
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Date: 5/11/2015 10:21:00 PM
Touching. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 5/11/2015 10:22:00 AM
BW, back again to read your awesome poem once more and to congratulate you on your wonderful win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/10/2015 6:32:00 PM
Wow brilliant BW! So full of longing only a mother can truly feel. Sad yet uplifting in spirits. Congrats and well desrved
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Date: 5/10/2015 12:03:00 PM
Very nice. Congrats.
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Date: 5/10/2015 11:08:00 AM
Have a wonderful day Broken, children or not. It takes a special mother to care for all living things... Congrats on the win. SKAT
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Date: 5/10/2015 10:01:00 AM
Broken, Congratulations on the fine win... Linda
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Date: 5/10/2015 8:28:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/2/2015 9:27:00 PM
Oh, Constance. . .made me weep. so very sad...so touching. . .
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Date: 5/1/2015 10:53:00 PM
constance, this is the same quote I hope to write about but in a very different way. WEll, about yours, I am sure it is a winner. I'ts beautiful and haunting, which you do so well!!
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Date: 5/1/2015 3:04:00 PM
Oh Broken, again you brought tears to my eyes. So heartbreaking for you, but how beautifully you painted your deep love and heartache with your words. Sad, but an excellent write for the theme and visual. Best wishes for the contest. 7+Fav, Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/1/2015 10:00:00 AM
Can feel the deep sorrow and the heartache. Very beautifully written. #7
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Date: 5/1/2015 6:47:00 AM
A sad and beautiful tribute to your little soul. Beautifully penned with love.
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Date: 5/1/2015 4:47:00 AM
So so heartbreaking - this moved me to tears - I can't imagine the pain of losing a child - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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