A House In New Orleans

She always led me down that alleyway holding my left hand with both of hers, like a child, excitedly. It was awkward of course, and I did all I could not to trip in her feet. But she made small, quick steps, avoiding the overgrown weeds with learned skill. My heartbeat quickened as we reached the low gate, when suddenly sunshine would wash over us. It felt distinctly wild and Mediterranean, looking in where we shouldn’t, where old ‘mad’ Mr Winthorpe had set up his little animal grave. It was beautiful.

Weeds and stones and love
Planted with you all the above
Your memories live
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A   Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 12:41 AM
Nice win. LINDA
Inman Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 10:38 AM
Enjoyed your write, Miriam.
A. Sharma Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 2:20 AM
Lovely poem n win Miriam.. big congrats!
Calleja Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 8:31 AM
thank you!!
George   Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 12:06 AM
You paint a very vivid picture in this well penned Haibun dear, Miriam. Many congrats on your win
Calleja Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 8:32 AM
Thanks for reading Elaine! You may find more of my poetry on FB by looking up pomegranateheart
Scars Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 4:32 PM
Miriam, congrats on your placement with the amazing poem :) *smiles* -luloo
Lane Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 3:25 PM
Well done and congratulations on your finish in my contest, Miriam.
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