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A House In New Orleans

She always led me down that alleyway holding my left hand with both of hers, like a child, excitedly. It was awkward of course, and I did all I could not to trip in her feet. But she made small, quick steps, avoiding the overgrown weeds with learned skill. My heartbeat quickened as we reached the low gate, when suddenly sunshine would wash over us. It felt distinctly wild and Mediterranean, looking in where we shouldn’t, where old ‘mad’ Mr Winthorpe had set up his little animal grave. It was beautiful. Weeds and stones and love Planted with you all the above Your memories live

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Date: 2/5/2016 12:41:00 AM
Nice win. LINDA
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Date: 1/29/2016 10:38:00 AM
Enjoyed your write, Miriam.
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Date: 1/29/2016 2:20:00 AM
Lovely poem n win Miriam.. big congrats!
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Miriam Calleja
Date: 1/29/2016 8:31:00 AM
thank you!!
Date: 1/29/2016 12:06:00 AM
You paint a very vivid picture in this well penned Haibun dear, Miriam. Many congrats on your win
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Miriam Calleja
Date: 1/29/2016 8:32:00 AM
Thanks for reading Elaine! You may find more of my poetry on FB by looking up pomegranateheart
Date: 1/28/2016 4:32:00 PM
Miriam, congrats on your placement with the amazing poem :) *smiles* -luloo
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Date: 1/28/2016 3:25:00 PM
Well done and congratulations on your finish in my contest, Miriam.
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