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A Haven Worth Ravin' About

Safe haven – a sanctuary, 
a loving father’s arms of rest,
asylum sans adversary, 
a place wherein we know we’re blessed.

Heaven! that’s our final refuge
though there are many here on earth.
It's worth checking out, who'd refuse
a place where you can find rebirth?

Delight which steers our day of death,
complete with the number seven.
What’s the password, the shibboleth,
for entering in to heaven?

Repentance, pardon are begun
by sheer belief in what God’s done.


a hybronnet on haven
written February 13, 2017
for Broken Wings' contest on "H".

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 2/20/2017 7:09:00 PM
Nice one, Reason. Uplifting...and congrats on your placement in the contest.
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Date: 2/19/2017 1:23:00 PM
These words are so uplifting and true! Wonderful poem, Reason! God bless. :)
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Date: 2/18/2017 2:23:00 PM
Congratulations Reason: I do like your Hybronnet. I chose a similar subject to do a Hybronnet. Great minds? Lol. SuZ
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Date: 2/18/2017 1:35:00 PM
Reason congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful poem
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Date: 2/18/2017 8:56:00 AM
Great use of form Reason, congratulations...
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Date: 2/18/2017 10:11:00 AM
Thanks, Charlie, new form, for me but I like the shorter lines.
Date: 2/14/2017 2:13:00 PM
Reason...this is fabulous!! So very true!! I like this form also...I have not heard of it before!! Well done!! Best wishes in the contest!! Hugggs deb.
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