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A Happy Young Pup

Walk at the mall before most people are up An active old soul, like a happy young pup A lesson to be learned Though your head you can't turn Old or not, you can still fill your cup

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/11/2017 6:23:00 AM
Jack...you are something. A funny guy I can see. No wonder my husband loves reading your limericks. You are ornery. Lovely. Emma :)
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/11/2017 6:43:00 AM
LOL So happy to hear it... give him a big smacker!!! If I was there, I'd give him one!!! Uh... hugs, Jack xxx
Date: 9/11/2017 4:38:00 AM
Yes, I understand the ways of not growing up...my wife sometimes thinks I'm crazy when I act like I'm 19 again! However I don't look as suave as I did back in those days! I really enjoyed reading you illustrious poem here this morning my friend! What an amazing piece! You have written such a magnificent write I'm lovin it!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/11/2017 7:00:00 AM
YOU LOOKED SUAVE!!!!!!!! Not me... EVER! lol
Date: 9/10/2017 10:58:00 AM
At this rate you will never grow old.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/10/2017 11:13:00 AM
I doubt you will grow up even then. I don't plan too.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/10/2017 11:04:00 AM
Did you say grow up??? NEVER! Not till I reach 100!!! xxx
Date: 9/10/2017 8:41:00 AM
I have coffee with Jack every day// In the morning before I go play// His attitude's flip// He has a loose lip// Makes me smile when I go on my way! TROT ON PUPSON!!!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/10/2017 10:24:00 AM
BIKE ON through the mounTAINS Sir John John!!! Happy old souls are we!!!

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