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A Hand In Time

I view my hand. I see an ancient land. A melanomic crater, deep in the desert, speaks of greedy sun-soaked days. Wanton then. Gone now. Sparse wispy palm trees cluster, storm ravaged, angled randomly, now almost invisible, now silver in the light. Ravines compressed in lines symmetrical, as from space, appearing geometric, requiring translation, needing understanding, awaiting exploration. Ahead, beyond the fault line, mountains expand and converge, blue-edged and rising high above the sandy plain, sinuous, majestic, uncharted. Stretching and contracting as wrinkled parchment in a shoreline breeze, pointing the way to the long journey’s end. Translucent and yes still beautiful. A multitude of moments has slowly wrought such change. Soul-stirring eloquence silently tells of times and deeds long past, though yet concealing secrets deep, of silken dreams within a lover’s sleep, and memories of a sweet caress,

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Date: 2/27/2023 3:11:00 AM
I've just popped back to read this again. It's my favourite poem. I'm not a huge reader of poetry, certainly not til recently but of all the poetry I have read, famous or otherwise, this one would be the one that comes to mind if someone asked me what my favourite poem is. It talks of a life lived but of a soul still with an incredible amount to give. I'm conscious of some of the themes in some of your poems and I hope you continue to find inspiration to share your beautiful thoughts
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Peter Rees
Date: 2/27/2023 4:53:00 AM
What a lovely comment, DD. I really value and look forward to your comments but this one is very special. Thank you so much.
Date: 2/16/2023 3:19:00 AM
Peter, I can see I'm so far behind with your poetry. I'll catch up over the next few days but for now..I have to say this poem is exquisite. I love this. Just beautiful. My favourite of all your work to date. I'm unsure how PS works but this should have been / should be POTD / POTW. Cheers - Gary
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Peter Rees
Date: 2/19/2023 2:51:00 AM
Thanks Gary for this glowing comment. Made my day !
Date: 2/15/2023 7:46:00 PM
This is so beautiful a poem escorting one to a wonderful 'handscape' of craters, mountains and ravines compressed in lines. The texture of the hand has changed over time and it has been a slow change and memories of the past come crowding in ! Amazingly deep !Enjoyed reading this poem unique in many ways !
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Peter Rees
Date: 2/16/2023 7:34:00 AM
I’m so pleased that you honoured me with a visit and also that you have so enjoyed reading my “handscape” as you put it. Thank you.
Date: 2/8/2023 9:40:00 AM
I like the free flow of your poetry, Peter. Your poem is very descriptive and express change and time well. Thanks for sharing and for visiting and commenting on my poetry. A poet friend in Texas. Bill
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Peter Rees
Date: 2/8/2023 9:46:00 AM
Many thanks to you Bill, my poet friend in Texas. Glad you enjoyed my poem about an old man’s hand. Peter.
Date: 2/8/2023 7:17:00 AM
Thank you for this wonderful comment. I’m quite over the moon with it and I’m so pleased that it brought back such happy memories of your childhood. Strange where inspiration can come from - this one was quite simply looking at the back of my hand and allowing imagination to take over.
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Date: 2/9/2023 1:44:00 AM
I felt like I sat there with you listening to stories. Such a wonderful poem!
Date: 2/7/2023 7:42:00 AM
There is no doubt about it Peter, you are an extremely talented writer. As a child I studied my grandparents hands and talked of the difference in skin texture and when one mark or another occurred. This brought back waves of memories for me and spoke deeply about life. Such a beautiful poem that deserves to be published more widely. I'm sure it could find itself on the walls of a gallery accompanying other art. Wonderful!
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Peter Rees
Date: 2/8/2023 9:43:00 AM
Thank you so much. My comments to you separately above.

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