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A haiku moment

no breeze tonight the trees pose statuesque- thought holds on pause Brian Strand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/23/2012 2:56:00 PM
Great one about nature..It seems that you too have the silence before the storm in England..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 3/21/2012 3:37:00 PM
Great haiku, Brian. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/19/2012 6:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Haiku" contest Brian. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/18/2012 4:58:00 PM
Very good, Brian. I remember seeing this one before. Congrats for your win in PD's contest.
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Date: 3/16/2012 8:28:00 PM
congrats Brian on an awesome win for these splendid words luv..
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Date: 3/16/2012 5:35:00 PM
masterfully done Brian. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/16/2012 7:57:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Brian. Excellent. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 3/15/2012 10:45:00 PM
BRIAN~.Congratulations ;-) THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest... Enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD
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Date: 6/27/2011 10:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in ^Rick's "One Haiku" contest Brian. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/26/2011 10:09:00 AM
Many congrats, brian : )
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Date: 6/26/2011 1:04:00 AM
Beautiful Haiku, Brian. Many congrats on your WIN. Lainie
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Date: 6/26/2011 12:06:00 AM
...and I held my breath reading this,,you created a beautiful moment with this. Congrats to you Brian!!! .. gautami
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Date: 6/25/2011 5:34:00 PM
Interesting.Congrats..Sara
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Date: 6/25/2011 5:40:00 AM
sad image using the word [pose] bring personification into the verse, haiku does not use poetic vehicles...Light & Love
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Date: 6/24/2011 11:09:00 PM
This one almost made me want to whisper-- everything sure is still... really enjoyed this one Brian-- :) Super congrats on your win :D
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Date: 6/24/2011 10:22:00 PM
incredible, brian... .. exquisite! super cheers to you for the high win..;) huggs
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Date: 6/24/2011 9:10:00 PM
hey, my fellow number ten.I love sharing that spot with a haiku this wonderful! Congratulations in the contest.
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Date: 6/24/2011 6:45:00 PM
Congrats Brian on your wonderful win in the contest with this unique write my friend.. a beautiful picture painted with words of poetry ..enjoy..
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Date: 6/24/2011 8:33:00 AM
That is exactly a haiku moment, Brian. "on pause" forever in your poem!
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Date: 6/23/2011 11:19:00 AM
the 'ku pause leaves me breathless, brian... wonderful!! just curious-- can;t find your "sins of a father".... ??? :) huggs
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Date: 6/22/2011 11:38:00 PM
Excellent Haiku!Enjoyed.
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Date: 6/22/2011 11:29:00 PM
VERY good! The last line sums it up quite nicely!
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