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A Haiku Moment

no breeze tonight the trees pose statuesque- thought holds on pause Brian Strand

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/23/2012 2:56:00 PM

Great one about nature..It seems that you too have the silence before the storm in England..Congrats on your win..Sara

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/21/2012 3:37:00 PM

Great haiku, Brian. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/19/2012 6:02:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Haiku" contest Brian. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/18/2012 4:58:00 PM

Very good, Brian. I remember seeing this one before. Congrats for your win in PD's contest.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/16/2012 8:28:00 PM

congrats Brian on an awesome win for these splendid words luv..

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/16/2012 5:35:00 PM

masterfully done Brian. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/16/2012 7:57:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Brian. Excellent. Nice going. Ralph

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/15/2012 10:45:00 PM

BRIAN~.Congratulations ;-) THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest... Enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/27/2011 10:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in ^Rick's "One Haiku" contest Brian. Love, Carol

Jack Horne

Date: 6/26/2011 10:09:00 AM

Many congrats, brian : )

Elaine George

Date: 6/26/2011 1:04:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku, Brian. Many congrats on your WIN. Lainie

Gautami Phookan

Date: 6/26/2011 12:06:00 AM

...and I held my breath reading this,,you created a beautiful moment with this. Congrats to you Brian!!! .. gautami

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/25/2011 5:34:00 PM

Interesting.Congrats..Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/25/2011 5:40:00 AM

sad image using the word [pose] bring personification into the verse, haiku does not use poetic vehicles...Light & Love

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/24/2011 11:09:00 PM

This one almost made me want to whisper-- everything sure is still... really enjoyed this one Brian-- :) Super congrats on your win :D

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/24/2011 10:22:00 PM

incredible, brian... .. exquisite! super cheers to you for the high win..;) huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/24/2011 9:10:00 PM

hey, my fellow number ten.I love sharing that spot with a haiku this wonderful! Congratulations in the contest.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/24/2011 6:45:00 PM

Congrats Brian on your wonderful win in the contest with this unique write my friend.. a beautiful picture painted with words of poetry ..enjoy..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/24/2011 8:33:00 AM

That is exactly a haiku moment, Brian. "on pause" forever in your poem!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/23/2011 11:19:00 AM

the 'ku pause leaves me breathless, brian... wonderful!! just curious-- can;t find your "sins of a father".... ??? :) huggs

Kash Poet

Date: 6/22/2011 11:38:00 PM

Excellent Haiku!Enjoyed.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/22/2011 11:29:00 PM

VERY good! The last line sums it up quite nicely!