A Haiku From a Lady Friend

Canada's my home So I've known real cold before Nipples scratched my car © Jack Ellison 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Chakrabarty Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 9:14 AM
not a common experience to an Indian...I know something about bellybuttons...Love Jack
Ellison Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 9:37 AM
When I heard this phrase, Couldn't stop chuckling for days!!! BTW love exposed bellybuttons! LOL
Eastman Avatar
February 25, 2015 at 2:53 PM
This cracks me up!... LIke I said... you need a few Dragons sprinkled abundantly around to warm things up... Did you scare your's off? McRaccoon has a Dragon show... and he has a lot of Dragons... And See... look how hot Vegas gets! Honest I wouldn't fib! Well, maybe a little...
Ellison Avatar
February 25, 2015 at 4:56 PM
It cracked up BIG TIME when I heard it!!! LOL xxx
Manassian Avatar
February 25, 2015 at 12:24 PM
OH DEAR!!! That's REALLY cold! ;)
Ellison Avatar
February 25, 2015 at 1:13 PM
LOL What a winter... spring can't come soon enough!!! Love, Jacko xxx
Wigley Avatar
February 25, 2015 at 8:34 AM
Great Haiku- so many questions- is nipples a nickname? Has someone been washing your car topless? We need to be told :)
Ellison Avatar
February 25, 2015 at 8:53 AM
Now I assumed Viv was a ladies name... sorry! LOL
Ellison Avatar
February 25, 2015 at 8:43 AM
LOL What a great name for a cat!!!!!!!!! Oh yah... topless at -30F! Loving hugs, Jack xxx
Nunez Avatar
February 25, 2015 at 7:49 AM
LOL!
Ellison Avatar
February 25, 2015 at 8:24 AM
Does this mean you found it amusing? LOL Hugs, Jack xxx
Allison Avatar
February 25, 2015 at 7:48 AM
ooh err Jack! chapel hat pegs eh lol - made me laugh my friend:-) Hugs jan xxx
Ellison Avatar
February 25, 2015 at 8:21 AM
This youngish chickie cracked me up with this line! LOL Love and happy thoughs, Jack xxx
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