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A Gut-Punch Question

I took my junker to the body shop My belly poking out of my tank top Intake guy looked up from his laptop Sayin' ~ 'Your car or you, Pop?!'

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/5/2020 9:37:00 PM

I would have made him "redo me".

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 8/4/2020 3:25:00 PM

Funny Gershon!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/4/2020 7:34:00 PM

Thank you, Timothy! :) gw

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/4/2020 10:11:00 AM

:) This is clever and very funny too! I'm in the market for a new body as well. Hugs, Carolyn

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/4/2020 5:24:00 PM

Your comment just tickled my funny bone, Carolyn... Kept thinking: Now what kind of market is Carolyn going to shop for a new body?! Thanks, Gershon

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 8/3/2020 8:30:00 PM

That was cold. I'd take my business elsewhere. :0 Very fun poem, Gershon. :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/4/2020 5:17:00 PM

Ha, ha! You know, I tried to take my business elsewhere too, but my belly had had enough for the day! lol. Thanks, Evelyn! :) gw

Belden Raiser

Date: 8/3/2020 7:28:00 PM

He will be much slimmer once the shop takes their pound of flesh!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/4/2020 4:26:00 PM

Ooh! What a 'cutting-edge comment,' Belden! Thanks, Gershon