A Greatness In Banality

I sneak a smoke
walk down the road
walk past the first house,
a farm house

Light up
take a long, blistery drag
(An occasional luxury nowadays,
my first in a week)

It hits me
It hits me

a pair of siamese trees
looms over me.

Pass the trees
I look at the field
little plants
the color of asparagus
witha lighter shade
reflecting off them
An army of trees
stationary and popping
in the background
under a baby new sky

It is a good day
whent he world
looks like a Rembrandt

No dogs barking today
They're cool 'cause I'm cool

Second house
only a couple hits left

There are few things sadder
than the last hit
of the last cigarette

It resembles
a lost love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 29, 2010 at 2:05 PM
Very good ! I like this !
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