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Green in color; at home in the meadow. The perennially forward-moving Grasshopper finally rests motionless, At peace, quietly nibbling on Tall blades of grass. Equipped with large compound eyes And a pair of thread-like antennae, Twirling atop it's diamond-shaped head; Auditory organs on it's abdomen. It hears and sees all around it. Uh-oh, what is that? The fluttering of wings? The sound grows louder and louder. The quick grasshopper wastes no time Catapulting itself to safety, As if shot out of a canon. Savoring absolute freedom airborne albeit briefly. It's powerful hind legs tantamount to a slingshot. Propelling 20 times the length of it's body To escape being a bird's snack; It made no use of it's wings. (Imagism) Imagism Poetry Contest Sponsored by Emile Pinet Date written: 08/14/2021

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Date: 9/4/2021 6:19:00 PM
Your poem makes me want to write a little book for children I would title: Simon The Happy Little Green Grass Guy. What a great picture. Makes a cool illustration for your poem.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/5/2021 1:18:00 PM
Thank you so much for the feedback and wonderful comments on my poem, Marikate:-)
Date: 9/4/2021 9:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed "A Grasshopper" write/picture. Your green friend look so regal. Have a blessed day/weekend.
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Date: 9/1/2021 8:19:00 AM
Edward, CONGRATS on your win with this vividly descriptive piece! Janice
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/1/2021 8:43:00 AM
Thank you very much, Janice:-)
Date: 9/1/2021 8:12:00 AM
Congratulations Edward, your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest. Very well done, it was a pleasure to read it my friend, Emile.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/1/2021 8:43:00 AM
Thank you so much for the wonderful feedback and my placement, Emile:-) I'm honored!
Date: 8/14/2021 1:21:00 PM
You did a fantastic job creating lively imagery my friend. A dynamic poem captures the colors and sounds beautifully. All the best, Edward.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/14/2021 2:58:00 PM
Thank you very much, Vijay:-) I appreciate it, my friend.

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