A Good Sense Of Humour Blunts The Sharp Blades Of Reality

Good Sense Of Humour Blunts The Sharp Blades Of Reality Poetry
Contest //Sponsored by: Natasha L. Scragg
Contest Judged:  8/30/2025 4:27:00 AM
( 2nd Place )

Written: August 5, 2025


When life threw me a curveball,
I stumbled—then chuckled mid-fall.
Lumped knees, not pride, I wore like bent,
because sneering is something I've seen.

In chemo rooms and vestibules,
I frenzied dry jokes on aseptic walls.
Doctors simpered, nurses would beam—
a punch-line where the fear had been.

When agony thumped hard and sleep grew thin,
I let the silly light writhe in.
A meme, a whirl , a silly song—
made aching days feel less so long.

No, humour incurable or patch,
But it's the ally, not made to part.
It doesn't silence, hurt or truth,
but let me smirk with my aching tooth.

So here's my laugh, though life gushes beneath,
it's how I rise, not how I lament!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Freie Avatar
August 30, 2025 at 7:46 AM
Rowena, the infant blade cuts the slickest, the rusty blade cuts the longest, but the switchblade tongue...cuts the quickest! Life does not concern or discern itself with any blade wielded.
Curtis Avatar
August 10, 2025 at 8:50 AM
If there is strength from weakness There's humor in adversity, you did a fine job here. God Bless
Velasco Avatar
August 10, 2025 at 11:57 AM
Thank you so much! I really appreciate your kind words. Finding strength in weakness and humor in tough times is truly a blessing. God bless you too!
George Avatar
August 8, 2025 at 12:40 AM
Hi Rowena, really appreciate your positivity and the ability to get over a difficult situation with light hearted humour. Life isn't easy for anyone dear. But our happiness depends on how we accept the challenges of life. Wish you better health and greater cheer.
Velasco Avatar
August 8, 2025 at 2:37 AM
Thank you so much for your kind and encouraging words You’re so right — life will always have its challenges, but our outlook makes all the difference. Wishing you joy, health, and many reasons to smile too
Williams Avatar
August 7, 2025 at 3:34 AM
Dear Rowena,this is absolutely brilliant—raw, witty, and quietly defiant in the best way. Your ability to meet pain with humor, and fear with light, is deeply moving. I felt every line...Love and Light
Velasco Avatar
August 7, 2025 at 6:07 AM
Thank you so much.Turning pain into something lighter is my way of navigating it, and knowing it connected makes it all worth it. Love and light right back to you!
Proxenos Avatar
August 7, 2025 at 2:33 AM
I hope you are fit,well and coping but having read your humor, I'm certain you cope. I like your style Rowena and had a couple of chuckles. Different and understandable is what I seek and I found what I always look for in this awesome poem. Laughter heals and I KNOW SO. HUGS and BLESSINGS, Jennifer
Velasco Avatar
August 7, 2025 at 2:46 AM
Thanks so much for the lovely message! I'm so glad the poem gave you a laugh—laughter really is the best healer. Big hugs and blessings right back to you!
Daniels Avatar
August 6, 2025 at 6:10 PM
Wow Rowena! Your positivity is phenomenal. Chemo is one great test thrown to humans today. I salute how you coped & emerged. Hugs for your humour.x.
Velasco Avatar
August 6, 2025 at 6:17 PM
Thank you so much! Life throws tough tests, but laughter truly helped carry me through. Big hugs back to you—grateful for your kindness!
Dietrich Avatar
August 6, 2025 at 1:12 PM
wow, you did yours SO WELL. I have not posted my entry yet, but this one of yours makes me wish I had thought up YOUR idea instead. A FAVE(did you have cancer? I had breast cancer but decided against chemo and only did radiation. That was 9 years ago)
Velasco Avatar
August 6, 2025 at 2:10 PM
Big respect to you, and wishing you nothing but continued good health!
Healey Avatar
August 6, 2025 at 7:59 AM
"Laughter is the best medicine" - truer words were never spoken...and I sincerely hope that you are enjoying good health. Well done.
Velasco Avatar
August 6, 2025 at 2:06 PM
Thank you so much! I truly believe in the healing power of laughter—it keeps the spirit light even when life gets heavy. Wishing you continued joy and good health too!
Gondolf Avatar
August 6, 2025 at 2:58 AM
People cope with suffering and sorrow in different ways, humor and laughter will always ease the pain. Nicely written, Rowena. John
Velasco Avatar
August 6, 2025 at 3:03 AM
Thank you, John. I truly agree—humor can be a soft landing when everything feels hard. Appreciate your kind words.
Rolland Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 4:29 PM
wonderful made m think to a special idea, hospitals need humor, nurses know that, great poem
Velasco Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 5:01 PM
Thank you so much! I totally agree — hospitals definitely need humor, and nurses are often the unsung heroes of that laughter. I’m really glad the poem sparked that thought for you.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 4:08 PM
enjoyed the humor and appreciate your perspective about the role humor can play. Well executed poem, Rowena. Best wishes with the contest, hugs, Sara
Velasco Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 5:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sara! I really appreciate your kind words and support. Humor’s been a big part of my journey, so I’m glad it came through. Wishing you all the best too — hugs right back!
Baker Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 3:50 PM
Excellent message in this fine poem, Rowena. As the tide goes both down and up, so will we. Hunor is a great crutch when used at the appropriate time. I need a little more humor in my life right now! Smiles ~ Blessings my friend. Bill
Velasco Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 4:59 PM
Thanks so much, Bill! Yep, life’s full of ups and downs, and a little humor definitely helps keep us afloat. I hope some good laughs find their way to you soon — you deserve them. Take care, my friend!
Allison Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 3:23 PM
Just spent 2 weeks at the cancer hospital in the UK with my hubby - a sense of humour definitely helps get you through the toughest times in fact I would never have picked up my pen if it wasnt for his surgery in 2013 and now i try and make folk smile with my sillies and have published 2 books although poopy poems and toilet humour aren't to everyone's taste lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Velasco Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 4:57 PM
Wow Jan, thanks for sharing that. You're so right — humor really does get us through the tough stuff. Love that you turned it into something creative and fun! Poopy poems or not, making people smile is such a gift. Big hugs to you and your hubby
Gifford Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 1:29 PM
Hello Rowena, this is an excellent write and enjoyable read. Loved it.
Velasco Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 4:55 PM
Appreciate you taking the time to read and leave such a kind note!
Anaya Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 12:11 PM
Humor indeed! Rowena if we can't laugh at ourselves, we need re-evaluation! may as well be a stone-faced stolid. Love this! Looking up new words is good for me. Faving for my treasure box. Rowena I hope you never have to experience harsh realities~
Velasco Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 12:17 PM
Aw, thank you! That really made me smile. Totally agree — if we can’t laugh at ourselves, we’re just asking to turn into stone! I’ve definitely learned that humor makes the hard stuff a little lighter. Really appreciate the fave and your kind words.
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