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A Gold Wire Home

I love your soft heavenly kisses You had me when you chirped hello Maybe if you ask me again I will be your Mrs All this ugly wire must go. You had me when you chirped hello I want for us to have a loving home All this ugly wire must go. How about gold wire-I do not mean chrome I want for us to have a loving home Maybe if you ask me again I will be your Mrs How about gold wire-I do not mean chrome I love your soft heavenly kisses Date Written: 5/21/2021 Photo # 2 Rhyme Zone Note: Love Birds Need A New Home-Love/Nest. A Gold Wire Home Is Her Request. Pantoum Rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Eve Roper

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Juliet Ligon

Date: 5/25/2021 10:12:00 AM

This is so cute. Sounds like they want a mansion.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/25/2021 11:29:00 AM

Thanks for writing. Glad you like this fun write. Yes, she wants a gold mansion. Have blessed day.........................

Jan Allison

Date: 5/24/2021 11:41:00 AM

what a lovely pantoum this form is challenging and you wrote a lovely poem good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/24/2021 1:57:00 PM

Thanks for writing and for your good luck. Yes, this was a challenging write. Have blessed day with hugs.........................

Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/22/2021 10:38:00 AM

Beautiful symbolism!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/23/2021 9:16:00 AM

Thank You, for writing. Glad you like my love bird write. Have a blessed day/weekend.............

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/21/2021 5:41:00 PM

Great Pantoum Paula, your wording and symbolism are perfectly exquisite; I wish you good luck in the contest, have a great evening

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/22/2021 8:45:00 AM

Thank You, for writing and for you good luck. Glad you like this fun write. Have a blessed day/weekend.............