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A Goblin's Dirge

Tears, cold tears, amid the rose’s thorns as weeping shadows dance o’er long cold bones crying in the clouds of sobbing dawns sobbing in the depth of unfilled holes the agony of ancient crying pipes scarred the weeping thoughts of cringing souls raindrops fell, as if by weeping angels shed chilled the crying moans of those not dead played sobbing taps upon uncovered heads and as the sobbing mourners slow withdrew the weeping raven mourners slowly flew crying, amid the rose’s thorns, cold tears ©7/25/2021 The Goblin’s Jewel Box 1 Poetry Contest

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Date: 8/16/2021 2:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful rhyme story/write. Love your line, "raindrops fell, as if by weeping angels shed," Have a blessed day..............
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Date: 7/27/2021 3:17:00 AM
Cold tears makes me think of crocodile tears. I admired the rain angels line so much. Kudos fir this fab poem! ------<<<<<<<^^^^^>>>>>>>>~~~~~~>>>>>> Also plz do read and comment my newest poem here.
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Date: 7/26/2021 7:39:00 PM
Very well done, John; great use of poetic language and control. Too many thorns on this earth -- profound write!
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Date: 7/26/2021 4:53:00 PM
very well done, John. I love how masterfully you wrote it with meter.
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John Lawless
Date: 7/26/2021 6:33:00 PM
I was trying to maintain the poetic ethic while messing with the melancholy cliches

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