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A glow of your first kiss

Love poem for Pamela John Though it was as quick as a flash light And as light as plucked feathers That even a lazy wind would have Swept it away with ease Still on my lips glows your first kiss A silent audience of multitudinous stars Witnessed as we held each other tight On that September night And can testify how warm we felt Yet the freezing air of a dying winter And maybe there were astronomers Riding on the moon With cameras and binoculars To capture that historic moment And preserve it on great books of astronomy For we are stars too living on planet earth Bojosi Ditshwele ©

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/29/2015 12:57:00 AM
What a beautiful romantic write! Pandita
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Date: 12/8/2013 8:01:00 PM
Bojosi,, , Congratulations on 'Your own favorite poem contest." I truly miss reading and scanning poems from the winning contest list. Hope you are well! Always & Forever * Linda
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Date: 12/2/2013 8:41:00 AM
Congrats on the win, Bojosi
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Date: 12/2/2013 5:53:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: - A favorite poem of yours! -by Giorgio V. - A clear favorite poem! - Well done, Bojosi !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/8/2013 8:19:00 AM
ncooooh..... *Sweet* baby love
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Date: 9/29/2013 11:56:00 AM
Well done, Bojosi. Excellent. Congrats. Ralph
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Date: 9/28/2013 9:14:00 PM
beautifully penned...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 9/28/2013 2:16:00 PM
bojosi, love your winning poem ......... LOVE ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/28/2013 11:52:00 AM
Congratulations ! You are a winner , actually I have been reading all these poems ..every one is amazing.
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Date: 9/28/2013 5:16:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Bojoshi
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Date: 9/27/2013 7:45:00 PM
Bojosi, Congratulations on your "Beloved Poem" win. xox~ LINDA
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Date: 9/22/2013 7:33:00 AM
VERY BEAUTIFUL PIECE OF WRITTING
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Date: 9/18/2013 3:23:00 AM
Love your style. Wonderful composition! Keep up the excellent work! This is very lovely and heartfelt. I quite enjoyed readin. Always, Laura
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Date: 9/11/2013 7:25:00 AM
- Ohhh...so sweet - Like the line : "Still on my lips glows your first kiss" - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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