The Glow of Your First Kiss

Though it was as quick as a flash of light
and as light as a plucked feather
that even a lazy wind would have
swept it away with ease
still on my lips glows your first kiss

A silent audience of multitudinous stars
witnessed as we held each other tight
on that September night
and can testify how warm we felt
yet the freezing air of a dying winter

And maybe some astronomers
were riding on the moon
with cameras and binoculars
to capture that historic moment
and preserve it 
in great books of astronomy
for we are stars too 
living on planet earth

Bojosi Ditshwele ©
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Sietesantos Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 12:57 AM
What a beautiful romantic write! Pandita
A   Avatar
December 8, 2013 at 8:01 PM
Bojosi,, , Congratulations on 'Your own favorite poem contest." I truly miss reading and scanning poems from the winning contest list. Hope you are well! Always & Forever * Linda
Mehta Avatar
December 2, 2013 at 8:41 AM
Congrats on the win, Bojosi
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December 2, 2013 at 5:53 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: - A favorite poem of yours! -by Giorgio V. - A clear favorite poem! - Well done, Bojosi !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Molefhi Avatar
November 8, 2013 at 8:19 AM
ncooooh..... *Sweet* baby love
Taylor Avatar
September 29, 2013 at 11:56 AM
Well done, Bojosi. Excellent. Congrats. Ralph
Adams Avatar
September 28, 2013 at 9:14 PM
beautifully penned...congrats on your win :)
A  Avatar
September 28, 2013 at 2:16 PM
bojosi, love your winning poem ......... LOVE ~SKAT~
Rain Avatar
September 28, 2013 at 11:52 AM
Congratulations ! You are a winner , actually I have been reading all these poems ..every one is amazing.
Mehta Avatar
September 28, 2013 at 5:16 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Bojoshi
A   Avatar
September 27, 2013 at 7:45 PM
Bojosi, Congratulations on your "Beloved Poem" win. xox~ LINDA
Mcdaid Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 7:33 AM
VERY BEAUTIFUL PIECE OF WRITTING
Breidenthal Avatar
September 18, 2013 at 3:23 AM
Love your style. Wonderful composition! Keep up the excellent work! This is very lovely and heartfelt. I quite enjoyed readin. Always, Laura
Andresen Avatar
September 11, 2013 at 7:25 AM
- Ohhh...so sweet - Like the line : "Still on my lips glows your first kiss" - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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