A Glimpse of Heaven

Brilliant skies dazzle my eyes with rainbows shining bright. Angel wings embrace me, their warm touch as soft as fleece. At the Lord's feet I sing, immersed in pure golden light, free from all pain in His presence, feeling love and peace. March 23, 2012 for Perceptions of Heaven contest (Carolyn Devonshire) Third place

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/30/2012 7:22:00 AM

So prettily enhanced by the picture. The poem itself was a visual delight. Congrats in the contest.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/27/2012 5:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Carolyn's contest Rhonda. Love, Carol

Gwendolen Song

Date: 3/27/2012 3:52:00 AM

Count me in!! Just don't give me an express ticket! Colorful picture and an even more colorful poem! Congrats, Rhon! :) Gwendolen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/26/2012 7:34:00 PM

congrats Rhonda on a dynamicx win for this lovely depiction of the great beyond luv.. elegant..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/26/2012 5:38:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara

Joann Grisetti

Date: 3/26/2012 4:37:00 PM

Oh, to have some of the love and peace here on earth, it would be heaven. Congratulations.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/26/2012 3:38:00 PM

Nice feeling to the meter! Congrad's on your winning write! Light & Love

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/26/2012 2:46:00 PM

Congratulations on a beautiful entry and win. Love, Joyce

Dan Kearley

Date: 3/26/2012 2:12:00 PM

Beautiful,and very hertfelt Rhonda! And thank you for your comment on what to do with my mothers situation.Thank you for all comments! :o) I will get back to your poetry once my mind and heart allow me peace.Once again,Very nice! :o)