A Gladiator's Freedom

On sand soaked with blood, two young men are breathing hard. The taller one has armor, a sword and a net. His opponent has only an arm guard and a dagger, but no encumbrance. Thus, moving quicker, this man avoids the constant thrusts of the taller one’s sword. Finding his chance, he lunges and his dagger pierces through unprotected flesh. Crimson red blood gushes forth from the tall man’s thick midriff. The crowd screams delight! Spurred on by their approval, the shorter man strikes again. This time his dagger finds muscle, sinew and bone. Hot pain consumes the tall man, but he can't cry out. His life blood is draining and the net and sword are useless. By oath he is bound to endure a violent death. . . and so he lifts his finger. To his friend - his opponent - he offers his throat. No mercy handkerchiefs wave. The editor gives thumbs down. As his fellow man buries the blade in his throat, a young man embraces death. The death of this slave is the gladiator’s lot. Another slave lives today, but his death also is imminent; then he too will finally know freedom. For Amy Green's Choka for a Chokehold Poetry Contest
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Brown Avatar
June 7, 2012 at 5:46 AM
Congratulations on your win in the Amy's contest Andrea. Love, Carol
Hunter Avatar
June 6, 2012 at 7:50 PM
This is killer!!...in every sense. So cool. Congrats!
A   Avatar
June 6, 2012 at 6:59 PM
ANDREA Congratulations with your wonderful win, In AMY GREEN'S contest. take care;-) ~ Always PD
Guzzi Avatar
June 6, 2012 at 6:21 PM
Congrad's on your big win Light & Love
Arowolo Avatar
June 6, 2012 at 5:56 PM
Excellent and wonderful piece,Andrea...GREAT write..Congratulations on your super win..XOXO...
Song Avatar
June 6, 2012 at 5:17 PM
The super nova of super chokas, Andrea. Love the longer form....powerful plot and and ending. :) Love, Gwendolen
May Avatar
June 6, 2012 at 5:16 PM
congrats on your win Andrea..
Richards Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 4:39 PM
Oh wow! You went above and beyond!! (You've inspired me to make mine longer.....LOL !!)
Babcock Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 1:10 PM
Nice visual poem for Amy Green's contest . My goodness I have not seen her name for some time. Good luck. love phyl
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 7:07 PM
How do you come up with all these forms and poetry Andrea? I am good to write one or two a week, or none. Great Choka for the contest!
Neels Avatar
May 13, 2012 at 11:01 AM
Omw, you took me there Andrea. This is a winner for sure, lovely visual write.. Thank you for that compliment on my write.. You made my day.. Hope the service is a blessed one ;) love Wilma
Anish Avatar
May 13, 2012 at 6:48 AM
Sounds like a scene from Conan the Barbarian. Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Fraser Avatar
May 12, 2012 at 9:16 PM
A most powerful write gracing the Gladiator, and what a write. This surely has to be recognised. Have a lovely Sunday Utah Babe :) xx
Falotico Avatar
May 12, 2012 at 9:01 AM
Very nice Andrea... well written winner here... Im well hun and you??? hugs and luv Michael
Guzzi Avatar
May 12, 2012 at 7:01 AM
OK Andie there's a naked one of me up for you! :P
Andresen Avatar
May 12, 2012 at 6:02 AM
So sad Andrea, but very well done - Like it. - Wish you luck in contest, hope for a win. - Have a lovely weekend, take care. - oxox hugs Anne-Lise
Burch Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 11:23 PM
Well Done Andrea! Best wishes in the contest!:) Thank you for all the well wishes and encouragement....love ya deb
Horne Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 3:18 PM
love this great gladiator write, andrea. a big winner for sure. many congrats on all your wins, my friend
Kendrick Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 2:22 PM
Interesting work..I don't know that you had that one in you..That is sad to think that those things really happened..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and taking time to comment...Sara
May Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 11:23 AM
this is a great write Andrea ..a winner all the way ..love Joseph
Ink-U-Script Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 11:08 AM
A sad poem..excellent message here Andrea.
Poet Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 10:05 AM
A sad write and a good message in this write Andrea.Best wishes to you.
Austin Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 9:15 AM
Kum susser tod -Come sweet death. NOt being German, I'm not sure of the German spelling. Bach wrote a work based on the saying. Not sure who the slave is today, but there are so many inequalities. What you are saying is so humane. Life is sweet, but not so sweet that slaves must suffer endlessly. Good write, dear Andrea. Love, daver
Williams Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 4:48 AM
PS. I have been told I look good in a skirt ha ha ha am doing that woman thing again...
Williams Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 4:47 AM
Andrea this get the thumbs from me he he..good luck, might have a go at this one, prepare for battle for my friend da da dahh...David
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