A Gift of Immortality

When the sun disappears from view, 
it hasn't gone completely.
When the moon fades from the morning sky, 
it hasn't gone completely.
As I sit across from you 
and 
whisper secrets about what once was 
We have our lives ahead of us
 to see what we mean by our words
Actions may be remembered 
and recalled
They may show us what time 
sacrificed looks like to the untrained eye
Yet the one thing that remains permanent
 is how our words affect each other
My heart may hear your
 voice
My heart may sing your 
song
Yet there is no sound I would rather 
hear 
That compares to that of your
 heartbeat
And when that
 heartbeat ceases to have a sound
It shall take its place amongst 
mine
My heart shall beat for both of us
You will live on within me
Immortals once were told that death
 could not ensnare them
But they discovered the greatest way
 of staying permanent
Was by living amongst others
 by residing within them
So when they were no longer needed
And immortals fled 
to the sky
They were always remembered
Because they dwelt 
within us
Not just for the life that they lived
But inside our bodies and heartbeats as well
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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May 7, 2016 at 10:51 AM
AWESOME POEM, SHANE--LINDA
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May 6, 2016 at 8:49 AM
lovely write, Shane. skat
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May 6, 2016 at 7:57 AM
So true, the heart (memory) holds immortality with each beat.
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