The second poem I posted was entitled "Forgiveness" so I had to come up with a different title.
Forgiveness is a reed, bending in the wind A harvested fruit tree, bearing fruit again A forest consumed by fire, thankful it's been thinned But most of all forgiveness is the ultimate revenge an original poem by Daniel Turner
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