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A Forgiving Nature

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The second poem I posted was entitled "Forgiveness" so I had to come up with a different title.

Forgiveness is a reed, bending in the wind A harvested fruit tree, bearing fruit again A forest consumed by fire, thankful it's been thinned But most of all forgiveness is the ultimate revenge an original poem by Daniel Turner

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Sharon Gulley

Date: 9/7/2016 8:25:00 AM

What an awesome write, Daniel. I enjoyed the lesson, the imagery and poetry. A (7) for me and a fav. Sharon : )

Daniel Turner
Date: 9/8/2016 11:19:00 AM

Thank you so much, Sharon! You must have gotten eye strain reading my scribbles. Lol I appreciate your sincere kindness.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/27/2016 4:45:00 AM

I tend to forgive too easily does that mean I'm vengeful Daniel? I dearly love your first three lines in this poem. Like A. Pope said.. to err is human; to forgive, divine. I adhere to that. Great writing Daniel. I am heading for bed now...Nite! ; )

Daniel Turner
Date: 8/27/2016 3:38:00 PM

Mrs Connie. I wish everyone was "vengeful" like you. Thank you so much for the kind comments. I always look forward to our next visit. Good night and sweet dreams.

Carole Duet

Date: 8/24/2016 10:48:00 PM

Forgiveness as revenge? What a thought...a deep thought!! Neat little poem! I like it.

Daniel Turner
Date: 8/25/2016 7:05:00 AM

Yes, the ultimate revenge. Proverbs 25:22 "Heap coals of fire upon their head" Thank you for stopping by Carole. Louisiana huh? I'm just right above you in Arkansas:) Wooo pig sooiee!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/22/2016 11:46:00 PM

wow, this is good work, and DEEP

Daniel Turner
Date: 8/23/2016 9:49:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea. That is quite a compliment coming from you. I'm flattered.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 8/20/2016 2:08:00 PM

Hi Daniel, an excellent write from your pen once more. I do love your take on the theme of forgiveness. Well written my friend, with wonderful content, your last line, excellent. A complete vision my friend. Excellent message. This has to be a seven....Mike.

Daniel Turner
Date: 8/20/2016 5:15:00 PM

Thank you Mike. I appreciate your friendly visits. You doing OK today? Thanks for dropping in!

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/20/2016 9:26:00 AM

Very powerful message, Daniel. Love the last line. You have imaged 'forgiveness' very well. Sandra

Daniel Turner
Date: 8/20/2016 11:44:00 AM

Thank you Mrs Sandra. I always enjoy your friendly visits.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/20/2016 8:08:00 AM

Very well-written my friend, Daniel!

Daniel Turner
Date: 8/20/2016 11:43:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios. Have a splendid afternoon.

Abosede Ogundare

Date: 8/20/2016 7:12:00 AM

Yes, that last line is so true. Thanks for reminding us of how important forgiveness is...Beautiful piece Daniel.

Daniel Turner
Date: 8/20/2016 7:36:00 AM

Thank you Abosede. You are always welcome here my friend. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. Be blessed!

Lynn Marie

Date: 8/19/2016 7:41:00 PM

Truth interspersed with nature is a beauty unto itself...you have outdone yourself with this profoundly expressive piece, in so few words. I love the "magnitude" of it's true definition...once fully understood...it's power to change lives is endless. Excellent writing, a most inspiring read. blessings, lynn

Unknown Person

Date: 8/19/2016 3:59:00 PM

so true...forgiveness is big word......well wrtten..

Daniel Turner
Date: 8/19/2016 4:57:00 PM

Thank you Lekhika. I love friendly faces and friendly visits. Please tell me how to pronounce your lovely name!

Tim Smith

Date: 8/19/2016 3:56:00 PM

I agree DT...turn the other cheek...you might not like what they do but if you lower yourself to their level you lose.

Daniel Turner
Date: 8/19/2016 4:54:00 PM

When I was younger, I struggled with turning the other cheek. Now that I'm older, I realize I made the wrong choice. Thanks Tim. I appreciate your visits and comments.

Charlie Smith

Date: 8/19/2016 3:46:00 PM

Short and to the point, I like this one Daniel...

Daniel Turner
Date: 8/19/2016 4:52:00 PM

Thank you Charlie. I appreciate your kindness.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/19/2016 1:43:00 PM

- Being able to forgive is a strong trait - Carrying on hate is a heavy burden - Love the last line - A wonderful poem, Daniel - // Anne-Lise :)

Daniel Turner
Date: 8/19/2016 2:00:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise. Once again I am smiling:) I appreciate your kindness.

Lin Lane

Date: 8/19/2016 1:36:00 PM

Hi Danny. You're not odd at all in the writing of your last line. We're not to seek revenge because it's not ours to take. But in forgiving we can heap fiery coals on the heads of others, and in so doing we free ourselves from revenge and hate, hoping they see the error of their ways. Very insightful of you.

Daniel Turner
Date: 8/19/2016 1:58:00 PM

Lin, that was my late dad's favorite saying,"Heap coals of fire on their heads" (Proverbs 25:22). Not insight my friend, good parenting! Thank you for the treasured visit!

Barry Stebbings

Date: 8/19/2016 12:58:00 PM

Interesting poem Daniel. Was not expecting the last line.

Daniel Turner
Date: 8/19/2016 1:09:00 PM

Thank you Barry. I suppose I am a bit "odd" at times. Lol Always nice of you drop by. You're always welcome.