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Poem written for and submitted to "A Fly on the Wall" poetry contest, Suzette Richards, sponsor, November 21, 2025

A FLY ON THE WALL

Satire is traditionally the weapon of the powerless against the powerful. – Molly Ivins


G-7 Summit: A fly buzzes past
a plate of untouched canapés,  
watches sharp suits nod at nothing,  
landing briefly on a leaked memo~  
climate action postponed, again. 

It circles the champagne flute of a diplomat  
who laughs too loud at a war joke,  
then settles on the shoulder of an aide  
texting: They still haven’t noticed the typo in the treaty.  

The fly on the wall, sated on hypocrisy,  
flies out, as unnoticed as the promises.
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Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 7:31 PM
Oh, this is a splendid expose of a fly on the wall, fantastic write, Aloha.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 6:50 AM
many thanks, William. appreciate your visit and comments
Jones Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 5:40 PM
A great contender for the contest! Oh to be a fly on the wall! Well done!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 6:51 AM
thanks, sweet Karen.
Gwyn Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 1:07 PM
I just love you last line! "The fly on the wall, sated on hypocrisy, flies out, as unnoticed as the promises." perfectly done!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 6:51 AM
thanks for visiting, Bruce, and for your encouraging remarks. Appreciate it!
Gauthier Avatar
November 21, 2025 at 7:04 PM
Love the quote, love the poem. A very timely message ~
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 6:51 AM
wow, thank you, Line.
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