A Flight of Thoughts

Today, the weather is warm.
I go out into the autumn sun
to give my thoughts some air.
They fly out of their cage
and lift as if in search of meaning,
trailing their long sighs 
like kite tails. I watch them
soar upwards 
almost out of sight.

I call them but they won’t 
come back. They seem to like
the freedom of the sky,
the sun bleaching away 
the dark mold that had stained
their wings to a sooty-black.
There is a joy in them
riding the warm air, wheeling
way above the trees,
untethered from the cramped
confines where I had held them
hostage, imprisoned somewhere
on the inside of me.
After a lifetime I must learn 
to be kind to myself.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Toney Avatar
May 15, 2023 at 8:56 AM
Paul, another excellent example of your taking a normal experience - simply going for a walk, to think, on a warm, autumn day - and you gift us with, "A Flight of Thoughts," that "fly out of their cage and lift as if in search of meaning, trailing their long sighs like kite tails," ending it with the beautiful "After a lifetime I must learn to be kind to myself." Now that's poetry, my friend!
Willason Avatar
May 15, 2023 at 10:36 PM
Can only echo, though louder, my respose to yr kind comments for Spider Web...your words are valued and matter. It's good to know that a poem or two finds an audience and are worthy of serious consideration and moreover, give enjoyment. Thankyou Mark...appreciated.
Turner Avatar
May 12, 2023 at 1:49 PM
It can be a hard lesson, Paul. If you are like me, nobody will judge you as harshly as you judge yourself. Free thinkers have no boundaries, no restraints.
Willason Avatar
May 12, 2023 at 7:09 PM
True words Daniel...the dislike of the self once rooted in childhood is a demon to overcome. Thankyou my friend...always look forward to hearing from you. Take care and have a good weekend.
Lane Avatar
May 12, 2023 at 10:35 AM
Let your thoughts fly freely, Paul. Nothing within us should be caged with clipped wings. Your ability to personify inanimate objects and emotions is phenomenal.
Willason Avatar
May 12, 2023 at 7:05 PM
Really value yr comments Lin...hard to see your own poems from the outside as you tend to live inside of them. I tip towards being a harsh critic of what I write. Yr words are always encouraging. Appreciate your support...
M  Avatar
May 12, 2023 at 5:16 AM
Oh Paul this a wonderful poem….how lovely it would be if we could release and give flight to our negative, stifled , fearful thoughts….You made it sound beautiful and easy….and yes be kind to yourself….Deb x
Willason Avatar
May 12, 2023 at 6:47 PM
Thanks Deb for your positive comments...if one could only fly on the wings of poesy !. Alas the real world waits below and it ain't too bad. Appreciate yr support, take care
M  Avatar
May 12, 2023 at 5:18 AM
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