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A Fiery Rapture

Leading my soul within a fiery rapture Below, a haven of hushed dream I lie in beauty dancing a single light beam Her captivating eyes, awaiting the capture..... Her breath murmurous calling a poets desire I climb a delicate willow,tangled sweet breeze A lofty song twine the climbing trees As a spark ignites an endless fire Aglow,her soul to tame To you,a simple word.....define Twisting and turning to align She cries my name..... sponsor - Dear Heart Date Written - 8/18/2019 Contest- Writing Challenge 2, August 2019- Enclosed Rhyme

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Date: 8/23/2019 3:31:00 PM
Wow Rick, I love this! I am surprised it is not much higher on the winner's list. Congratulations on your win. I am happy I got to enjoy this! : ) xxoo
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Date: 8/23/2019 12:22:00 PM
Rick, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with your Enclosed Rhyme. Nice write !
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Date: 8/22/2019 11:36:00 PM
Congratulations my friend. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/19/2019 9:11:00 AM
Absolutely breathtaking, Rick. You’ve enraptured me with your poetic finesse. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/18/2019 3:44:00 PM
Wonderful write Rick. Good luck in the contest...I'm thinking to see your name there!
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