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A Feast For Ravens

Once, there was a time when I wallowed in darkness wading in the shallows of my flaws, I confess. Shadows of hovering ravens were my only friends. I was lost in time as stars died, but made amends by untying myself from yesterdays to stop crying. I stopped living in a morass as if I were dying. Many who remain tethered to their past try hiding but freedom will take flight in those hearts confiding. There is a gentle wind that blows through a soul leaving glittered traces of stardust to make it whole. Whispers murmur to wings that brighten the gloom, lifting the muddled veil of death so life can resume. No longer do I cringe at the dreary thought of death or gasping for air as if I were drawing my last breath. One day I will fall as carrion, my body lying supine and I become a banquet feast where many might dine. If feathered creatures circle me in skies of ash gray, who then will come to chase the hungry ravens away?

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Date: 1/15/2022 12:02:00 AM
I was thinking the exact same thing as Tom. Light would have less impact without darkness. I enjoyed this Lin. Blessings xxoo
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/15/2022 8:47:00 AM
Absolute truth. Thanks ever so much for your comments, Connie. Hugs!
Date: 1/11/2022 11:48:00 AM
very deep and dark Lin, excellent ink:-) hugs Jan xx
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/11/2022 4:12:00 PM
Thanks so much for the many times you've encouraged me, Jan.
Date: 1/11/2022 8:01:00 AM
I will come and chase them away my friend! Powerful ink Lin, I love it!!
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/15/2022 8:46:00 AM
;)
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Mark Koplin
Date: 1/14/2022 3:17:00 PM
I absolutely do!
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/11/2022 9:05:00 AM
Thank you, Mark, and I have no doubt you mean that sincerely.
Date: 1/11/2022 7:44:00 AM
Quite a dark verse Lin, very Poe like. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/11/2022 9:04:00 AM
Thanks, Tom. I wrote that last line a month ago and just got around to doing something with it this morning. I'm well and staying warm...kind of chilly this morning, but that's nothing compared to other parts of the country.

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