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A Father's Win

Father plays a game whatever it may be with his children to make them happy He is sincere before them don't want to lose in any way trying hardest level by acting to have the win of his children For contest: Sponsored by: Brian Strand Written by: bldevnath

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/30/2011 10:03:00 PM
VEry sweet!
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Bl Devnath
Date: 12/1/2011 12:18:00 AM
Thanks for your nice sweet comment. Wish you to sweet day.bl
Date: 11/30/2011 11:24:00 AM
My father played all sorts of games with us. He even let us bury him in the sand on the beach. Your poem reminded me of him, BL. Fathers go to all lengths to make sure their children are happy! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/30/2011 11:34:00 AM
Many Thanks for your sweet comment on my write. bl

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