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A Farmhouse Vale

A Farmhouse Vale Mist evolves down the hillside into the vale Where the farmhouses sit all put together There’s no sense of wind here, there’s no bit of gale Just one leery breeze that blends with the other The houses confine themselves within the shade And warmth flows there inside the chimneys conveyed Where some sides of the buildings glisten in light Sparkles with joy from now until the broad night It is early morning, fires are still aglow Burned all night with wood stored in the wicker trug Sparks, spitting out making a huge firework show A carefully placed guard to save the rag rug. Mam is stirring the porridge, a lovely sight Papa’s gone to the byre, check cows are alright Daybreak is here, the children need to awake Breakfast, then the long trek to school they must take Within the boundaries so warm and cozy The sights of any day of enlightenment No matter day or night the valley I see Complete, whole and surely full of contentment Around the kitchen table they had sat this night Mam with her sewing, Papa smiling at the sight Children asleep tucked up in their gossamer down In this idyllic place, the valley they call home COLLAB. between Russell Sivey and Seren Roberts There is a picture on Blog to show you what inspired us.

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Date: 6/17/2013 8:23:00 PM
I really loved that painting
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Seren Roberts
Date: 6/17/2013 8:59:00 PM
And tne poem ?
Date: 6/17/2013 6:46:00 PM
Quite the poem here! Very nostalgic. Lovely farmhouse scene-- sound like home.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 6/17/2013 9:00:00 PM
Yes like it used to be .....Seren
Date: 6/17/2013 9:50:00 AM
I love the way you alternate rhyme schemes... abab and aabb; very cleverly done! This is a delightful piece with great atmosphere, a pleasing cadence, and rich imagery. BRAVO to you both!!! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 6/14/2013 6:04:00 AM
You have done such an awesome job with this poem Seren, I really enjoyed writing this poem with you, thank you for inviting me to write with you! Tremendous work my friend!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 6/14/2013 11:02:00 AM
Hey Russell i think it should be said that we didnt do so badly here. LOL if i remember it correctly you asked me to collab a few months back.. I recited it and sent it to you, hope you like it....Seren
Date: 6/14/2013 4:54:00 AM
You guys did an excellent job with this poem,I'm just shocked to see that no other commendation was placed here on this poem,that which it so rightly deserves.I love it!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 6/14/2013 11:02:00 AM
Thanks Mustapha, for stopping by...Seren

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